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Comment LC-733: Comment Shortname:; Commenter: Lachlan Hunt <lachlan.hunt@lachy.id.au>; Message-id:; Section of the document concerned:

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COMMENT 1

1) W2

2) Abstract

3) N/A

4) E

5) Poor use of grammar in the following sentence. \"usable to\" should be
changed to \"usable by\".

\"Accessible\" means usable to a wide range of people with
disabilities...

6) \"Accessible\" means usable [by] a wide range of people with
disabilities...

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COMMENT 2

1) W2

2) Introduction

3) N/A

4) E

5) Poor use of grammar in the following sentence. \"usable to\" should be changed to \"usable by\".

Following these guidelines will also make your Web content
more usable to many other users, including...

6) Following these guidelines will also make your Web content
more usable [by] many other users, including...

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COMMENT 3

1) W2

2) Related Documents

3) Application Notes

4) E

5) Remove the extraneous comma before the word \"and\" from the following sentence:

For example, an application note on forms will provide a collection of techniques, and strategies for creating accessible forms.

6) For example, an application note on forms will provide a collection of techniques and strategies for creating accessible forms.

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COMMENT 4

1) W2

2) The Four Principles of Accessibility

3) N/A

4) E

5) Remove the extraneous comma before the word \"and\" from the following sentence:

WCAG 2.0 offers information about how to increase the ability of people with disabilities to perceive, operate, and understand Web content.

6) WCAG 2.0 offers information about how to increase the ability of people with disabilities to perceive, operate and understand Web content.

Proposed Change:; Related issues: (space separated ids); WG Notes: [BEN] Fixed. Updated XML source 14 June 2006. Response: http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-comments-wcag20/2007Jun/0003.html; Resolution: The draft has been updated to include these revisions.; (Please make sure the resolution is adapted for public consumption)