Privacy/TPWG/Editorial corrections

• share vs. pass
• separate web site and user agent requirements
• preference vs. general preference
• public commitment requirement (editorial?)
• consistency of data vs. information
• consistency of web site vs. party; data instead of data records
• dnt:1 rather than dnt signal
• editorial suggestions from vinay, with dsinger dispositions
• notes from Aleecia et al. on separate call
  • (see also responses in that thread)
  • response from npdoty
• proposed short-term changes from fielding
• potentially, ISSUE-218: Data that is out of scope
• potentially, ISSUE-227: User Agent requirements in UA Compliance vs. Scope section
• "minimized" rather than "limited" regarding permitted uses
• typos in Compliance draft
• per issue-214, are there any non-normative pieces of text from a previous ED/WD that we should move over?
  • reply from npdoty
• "that first party" rather than "that party"

This is just a rough working list for the editors to use, not coherent documentation. Not all links will work for the public. Additions/corrections to npdoty, please. Nick Doty 22:23, 25 September 2013 (UTC)