ISSUE-59: The 24-Oct-2013 Draft of Ch7 has some organizational issues and readability suffers

Chap7-Organization

The 24-Oct-2013 Draft of Ch7 has some organizational issues and readability suffers

State:
CLOSED
Product:
Document life cycle (pre 2014 chapter 7, now chapter 6)
Raised by:
Elika Etemad
Opened on:
2013-11-26
Description:
In the following e-mail, Elika identified several organizational issues with the 24-Oct-2013 Draft of Chapter 7 that result in poor readability and she proposes fixes:


<http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-w3process/2013Nov/0053.html>

Elika's proposed changes should be incorporated.
Related Actions Items:
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Related emails:
  1. [minutes] 19 February 2014 Revising W3C Process Community Group Teleconference (from coralie@w3.org on 2014-02-19)
  2. Re: New draft - please review (from jeff@w3.org on 2014-02-17)
  3. Re: New draft - please review (from szilles@adobe.com on 2014-02-17)
  4. Re: New draft - please review (from chaals@yandex-team.ru on 2014-02-17)
  5. Re: Ian Jacobs comments [Was: New draft - please review] (from chaals@yandex-team.ru on 2014-02-14)
  6. Minutes and summary of 3 February 2014 Chapter 7 Revision Task Force teleconference (from coralie@w3.org on 2014-02-04)
  7. Re: Agenda for Chapter 7 Task Force Telcon, 8AM Pacific, 11AM Eastern, 3 February (from chaals@yandex-team.ru on 2014-02-03)
  8. Re: Agenda for Chapter 7 Task Force Telcon, 8AM Pacific, 11AM Eastern, 3 February (from chaals@yandex-team.ru on 2014-02-03)
  9. Agenda for Chapter 7 Task Force Telcon, 8AM Pacific, 11AM Eastern, 3 February (from szilles@adobe.com on 2014-02-02)
  10. [minutes] and summary of 27 January 2014 Revising W3C Process Community Group Teleconference (from coralie@w3.org on 2014-01-27)
  11. Agenda for 27 January 2014 Process TF meeting (from szilles@adobe.com on 2014-01-27)
  12. Agenda for Chapter 7 Process Doc TF for Monday, 13 January 2014 (from steve@zilles.org on 2014-01-13)
  13. Agenda for Chapter 7 Process Doc TF for Monday, 6 January 2014 (from steve@zilles.org on 2014-01-04)
  14. RE: New chapter 7 draft (from szilles@adobe.com on 2013-12-16)
  15. Re: New chapter 7 draft (from chaals@yandex-team.ru on 2013-12-12)
  16. New chapter 7 draft (from chaals@yandex-team.ru on 2013-12-12)
  17. Re: w3process-ISSUE-72 (change types): Rationalising the definition of different types of change [Document life cycle (ch 7)] (from ij@w3.org on 2013-12-06)
  18. Re: w3process-ISSUE-72 (change types): Rationalising the definition of different types of change [Document life cycle (ch 7)] (from art.barstow@nokia.com on 2013-12-06)
  19. w3process-ISSUE-72 (change types): Rationalising the definition of different types of change [Document life cycle (ch 7)] (from sysbot+tracker@w3.org on 2013-12-06)
  20. [minutes] 2013-12-02 Revising W3C Process Community Group Teleconference (from coralie@w3.org on 2013-12-05)
  21. Re: [tr] Proposed New Outline (from chaals@yandex-team.ru on 2013-12-01)
  22. Re: General comments for Proposed Chapter 7 (from chaals@yandex-team.ru on 2013-11-29)
  23. Re: General comments for Proposed Chapter 7 (from galineau@adobe.com on 2013-11-27)
  24. Re: General comments for Proposed Chapter 7 (from jeff@w3.org on 2013-11-27)
  25. General comments for Proposed Chapter 7 (from art.barstow@nokia.com on 2013-11-27)
  26. Re: [tr] Proposed New Outline (from art.barstow@nokia.com on 2013-11-26)
  27. w3process-ISSUE-59 (Chap7-Organization): The 24-Oct-2013 Draft of Ch7 has some organizational issues and readability suffers [Document life cycle (ch 7)] (from sysbot+tracker@w3.org on 2013-11-26)

Related notes:

There are markers for content to be added on revising Candidate Recommendations, but that's really a separate issue, so I'll raise one. The reorganisation has been done.

Charles McCathie Nevile, 22 Jan 2014, 12:37:26

With the exception of the part that has become Issue 77 the remainder of this topic has been implement before or in the 22 Jan 2014 editor's draft.

Steve Zilles, 27 Jan 2014, 16:19:45

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