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Comment LC-967
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Commenter: Shawn Henry <shawn@w3.org> on behalf of W3C WAI

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Comment Type: general comment
Comment (including rationale for proposed change):

Editorial suggestions

Proposed Change:

note: some similar suggestions for other appendices and so any changes should be synched

suggestion: Use “Informative�? rather than “Non-Normative�? and link “informative�? to the glossary definition. Consider deleting one of them – either from the <h1> or from the first sentence. If leave first sentence, change to “Appendix D: Comparison of WCAG 1.0 checkpoints to WCAG 2.0 is informative.�?

suggestion: within table, align top (note with my configuration (Opera at 150%) I see nothing in the left column at the top of the first table)

suggestion: combine “New Level 1 requirements in WCAG 2.0 not mapped above�?, “New Level 2…�? and “New Level 3…�? into “WCAG 2.0 Success Criteria not mapped above�? (already have the level at the end of each success criteria) (rationale: groups information better by topic instead of splitting topics across multiple sections)

suggestion: Change column heading “WCAG 2.0 Success Criteria�? to “WCAG 2.0�? since that column includes some techniques and other info

suggestion: capitalize “Checkpoints�? in headings (including <h1>)

suggestion: consider putting the referenced terms in regular font style, not italic (rationale: simplify visual design) consider using standard link colours for terms

suggestion: consider putting the success criteria numbers in regular font style, not italic (rationale: simplify visual design)

suggestion: clean up top matter (\"Quick Table of Contents\" extraneous? \"Appendix D: Comparison of WCAG 1.0 checkpoints to WCAG 2.0\" repetitive with <h1> and links to self)

question: should the <title> and the <h1> match, or be more similar?
(space separated ids)
(Please make sure the resolution is adapted for public consumption)


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