I18n WG comments on XML Syntax for XQuery 1.0 (XQueryX)

Version reviewed

http://www.w3.org/TR/2005/WD-xqueryx-20050404/

Main reviewer

Felix Sasaki fsasaki@w3.org

Notes

These are so far personal comments, NOT on behalf of the I18N WG.

Comments

ID Location Comment Additional information Accepted
1 Sec. 5 "If the XQuery contains characters that are prohibited in XML text (such as < and &), they must be "escaped" as either character entity references or character references." It should be made clear what is meant my "prohibited in XML text", e.g. XML-predefined entities. See Bugzilla -
2 Appendix C.2. concerning various subsections. Editorial: Please add RFC 3023 in the reference section (Appendix A). See Bugzilla -

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