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I have two minor comments on the March 17th draft: - Terminology (3.3): I wonder about the difference between "event message" and "notification". The former should be defined, or uniformly replaced by the latter imho. - Terminology (3.3): leftover "manage" in the definition of "Subscription Manager" Best, Eric Dujardin -- Eric Dujardin THALES-TRT RD 128 F-91767 Palaiseau (33-1) 69 41 55 45 Received on Monday, 23 March 2009 14:57:33 GMT
Proposal: Change all uses of "event messages" with "notifications". The first use will actually just be deleted since "notifications" is already in that sentence. Change: Subscription Manager A Web service that accepts requests to manage get the status of, renew, and/or delete subscriptions on behalf of an event source. To: Subscription Manager A Web service that accepts requests to manage, get the status of, renew, and/or delete subscriptions on behalf of an event source. Added a comma after "manage". I think its the right word.
Proposal from Ram Suggested change: Section 3.3 [1]: In the definition of Delivery Mode, change The mechanism by which event messages are delivered from the source to the sink to The mechanism by which event messages (or notifications) are delivered from the source to the sink.. Section 3.3 [1]: In the definition of Subscription Manager: Change A Web service that accepts requests to manage get the status of, renew, and/or delete subscriptions on behalf of an event source. To A Web service that accepts requests to create, get the status of, renew, and/or delete subscriptions on behalf of an event source.. [1] http://www.w3.org/TR/2009/WD-ws-eventing-20090317/#terms
Proposal: Change all uses of "event messages" with "notifications". The first use will actually just be deleted since "notifications" is already in that sentence. Suggested change: Section 3.3 [1]: In the definition of Delivery Mode, change The mechanism by which event messages are delivered from the source to the sink to The mechanism by which event notifications are delivered from the source to the sink.. Section 3.3 [1]: In the definition of Subscription Manager: Change A Web service that accepts requests to manage get the status of, renew, and/or delete subscriptions on behalf of an event source. To A Web service that accepts requests to create, get the status of, renew, and/or delete subscriptions on behalf of an event source.. [1] http://www.w3.org/TR/2009/WD-ws-eventing-20090317/#terms
typo in the resolution - it's not "event notifications", its just "notifications"
reviewer Satisfied http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-ws-resource-access-comments/2009Apr/0001.html