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Bug 5145 - small editorial changes section 4.2.4-5.2
Summary: small editorial changes section 4.2.4-5.2
Status: CLOSED FIXED
Alias: None
Product: XML Schema
Classification: Unclassified
Component: Structures: XSD Part 1 (show other bugs)
Version: 1.1 only
Hardware: PC Windows XP
: P2 minor
Target Milestone: ---
Assignee: C. M. Sperberg-McQueen
QA Contact: XML Schema comments list
URL:
Whiteboard: presentation cluster / editorial cluster
Keywords: editorial, resolved
Depends on:
Blocks:
 
Reported: 2007-10-08 16:36 UTC by John Arwe
Modified: 2008-03-24 20:04 UTC (History)
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Description John Arwe 2007-10-08 16:36:01 UTC
4.2.4 References to schema components across namespaces (<import>)
"Note:  Some users of version 1.0 of this specification have mistakenly assumed that the primary purpose of the <import>..."
Note says there are 2 purposes, but leaves the reader hanging as to what those two purposes are.  Please add them.

4.2.4.1 Licensing References to Components Across Namespaces
"without massive redeclaration of the default namespace either "
Not seeing why redeclaration of the default namespace is itself a "massive" change (one line).  It certainly has pervasive effects.  Maybe just remove "massive" rather than baiting the reader into a religious argument.

5.2 Assessing Schema-Validity
having consistent space before each <dt> would improve readability
Comment 1 C. M. Sperberg-McQueen 2008-02-04 16:17:22 UTC
In an effort to make better use of Bugzilla, we are going to use the
'severity' field to classify issues by perceived difficulty.  This 
bug is getting severity=minor to reflect the existing whiteboard note
'easy'. 
Comment 2 C. M. Sperberg-McQueen 2008-03-22 14:12:32 UTC
During the teleconference of 21 March 2008, the XML Schema WG adopted a
wording proposal (the 'March 2008 omnibus proposal') which we believe
resolves in full the issues raised in this bug report.  The wording proposal
can be seen at

  http://www.w3.org/XML/Group/2004/06/xmlschema-1/structures.omni-200803.html
  (member-only link)

Revision of the sentence about massive namespace redeclaration led to
general restructuring of the paragraph containing it; the sentence itself
was lost in that revision, a victim of collateral damage.

The markup of section 5.2 was changed slightly in the hopes of improving
the spacing; it does not show up as a colored change.

John, as the originator of the bug report, I hope that you will agree that
the changes shown in the wording proposal resolve these issues satisfactorily.
If you do agree, please change the status of the bug report from 
RESOLVED to CLOSED; if you don't, please change it to REOPENED and let us 
know what's wrong.  If we don't hear from you, we will after a decent
interval (at least two weeks, but probably not until we think we are about
ready to go to last call, so probably at least four) remember Paul Scofield
as Thomas More saying "qui tacet, consentiret", and assume that your 
silence implies consent.
Comment 3 John Arwe 2008-03-24 20:04:07 UTC
mahvelous