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In section 3 (Examples), first paragraph is a sentence starting with: "That produced XQuery is presented only as a sanity-check..." This is slightly awkward to read. I suggest changing it to: "The generated XQuery is presented only as a sanity-check..." Appendix B (Transforming XQueryX to XQuery) starts with: "The following stylesheet converts from XQueryX syntax to XML Query syntax" Everywhere else, we refer to XQuery as XQuery, not XML Query. I suggest, for consistency, we change this sentence to: "The following stylesheet converts from XQueryX syntax to XQuery syntax"