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Bug 29886 - [SER31] 6 XHTML Output Method
Summary: [SER31] 6 XHTML Output Method
Status: RESOLVED FIXED
Alias: None
Product: XPath / XQuery / XSLT
Classification: Unclassified
Component: Serialization 3.1 (show other bugs)
Version: Candidate Recommendation
Hardware: PC Windows NT
: P2 editorial
Target Milestone: ---
Assignee: C. M. Sperberg-McQueen
QA Contact: Mailing list for public feedback on specs from XSL and XML Query WGs
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Reported: 2016-09-29 15:31 UTC by Tim Mills
Modified: 2016-10-14 13:29 UTC (History)
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Description Tim Mills 2016-09-29 15:31:26 UTC
The following sentence reads badly, probably in an effort to avoid ending a sentence of a preposition.

"The [POLYGLOT] specification permits namespace declarations to appear in a conforming document, but there are restrictions on which elements they can appear."

To avoid saying

"but there are restrictions on on which elements they can appear."

perhaps

"The [POLYGLOT] specification permits namespace declarations to appear in a conforming document, but restricts the elements on which they can appear."

would be better?
Comment 1 Andrew Coleman 2016-10-14 13:29:41 UTC
Agreed.  Fixed