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Bug 29844 - [SER31] Start of sentence
Summary: [SER31] Start of sentence
Status: RESOLVED FIXED
Alias: None
Product: XPath / XQuery / XSLT
Classification: Unclassified
Component: Serialization 3.1 (show other bugs)
Version: Candidate Recommendation
Hardware: PC Windows NT
: P2 editorial
Target Milestone: ---
Assignee: C. M. Sperberg-McQueen
QA Contact: Mailing list for public feedback on specs from XSL and XML Query WGs
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Reported: 2016-09-21 10:31 UTC by Tim Mills
Modified: 2016-10-14 13:18 UTC (History)
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Description Tim Mills 2016-09-21 10:31:40 UTC 
In the test

Apply the following two processes in sequence to create CDATA sections

i.   Unicode Normalization if requested by the normalization-form parameter.

ii.  apply changes as detailed in the description of the cdata-section-elements parameter for the applicable output method.

since (i) ends with a full stop, shouldn't (ii) begin with a capital letter?
Comment 1 Michael Kay 2016-09-21 10:58:38 UTC 
More particularly, items in a list should be grammatically homogenous. If the first is a noun phrase, the second should be a noun phrase.
Comment 2 Andrew Coleman 2016-10-14 13:18:59 UTC 
Reworded second bullet as

ii. Application of changes as detailed...