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Bug 24215 - Language of the definition of "internal response" can be simplified.
Summary: Language of the definition of "internal response" can be simplified.
Status: RESOLVED FIXED
Alias: None
Product: WHATWG
Classification: Unclassified
Component: Fetch (show other bugs)
Version: unspecified
Hardware: PC Linux
: P2 normal
Target Milestone: Unsorted
Assignee: Anne
QA Contact: sideshowbarker+fetchspec
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Reported: 2014-01-06 23:08 UTC by Nikhil
Modified: 2014-01-10 13:26 UTC (History)
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Description Nikhil 2014-01-06 23:08:02 UTC 
In section 2.3

"A filtered response is a limited view on a response, referred to as the filtered response's associated internal response."

takes a few passes to understand. How about:

"A filtered response is a limited view on a response. A filtered response's original response is its associated internal response."
Comment 1 Anne 2014-01-10 13:26:28 UTC 
I tried to clarify it without introducing a new word ("original"): https://github.com/whatwg/fetch/commit/b6e7d7c81095d50d0728911c08c2a7f2b231723c