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Hello, Just reviewing the spec and a handful of typos or minor style issues jumped out at me: Abstract -------- "...thus enabling better functional encapsulation within DOM." -> "within the DOM"? 7 Styles -------- "The flag signals that the rules, declared in an enclosing trees are applicable in the shadow DOM subtree." Stray comma, or missing comma elsewhere? s/trees/tree/ "Even when the apply-authors-styles is set..." -> "apply-authors-styles flag"? "...produced using parent calculation algorithm." -> "using the parent"? 10 HTML Elements and Their Shadow DOM Subtrees ---------------------------------------------- "If the element that can have fallback content, contains one insertion point." I think some words might be missing from this sentence, it's confusing. "The matching criteria value is universal selector..." -> "the universal selector"? "Otherwise, contains no insertion points or an insertion points that matches nothing." -> second "insertion points" should just be "insertion point" "All other <elements" s/<elements/elements/ 11.1 Extensions to Element Interface ------------------------------------ "1. If exists, discard current..." If a value exists? Seems very terse. 11.2.2 ShadowRoot Methods ------------------------- "2. Establish element, supplied as element argument as the..." -> missing comma between argument and as? "When invoked, it must return selection in shadow host's subtree." Some determiners might be good here, -> "a selection", "the shadow".
Awesome! Thanks!
http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/webcomponents/rev/4ad427043070