Bug 16204 - editorial - sec. 1.2 needs a few commas
Summary: editorial - sec. 1.2 needs a few commas
Status: CLOSED FIXED
Alias: None
Product: HTML WG
Classification: Unclassified
Component: HTML5 differences from HTML4 (show other bugs)
Version: unspecified
Hardware: All All
: P2 normal
Target Milestone: ---
Assignee: Simon Pieters
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Reported: 2012-03-02 18:18 UTC by Daniel Barclay
Modified: 2012-03-05 20:28 UTC (History)
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Description Daniel Barclay 2012-03-02 18:18:45 UTC
In section 1.2, the second sentence says:

  To keep the authoring language relatively simple for authors several 
  elements and attributes are not included as outlined in the other 
  sections of this document, such as presentational elements that are 
  better dealt with using CSS.

That would be cleared with a few more commas, perhaps as:

  To keep the authoring language relatively simple for authors, several 
  elements and attributes are not included, as outlined in the other 
  sections of this document, such as presentational elements that are 
  better dealt with using CSS.

(Note that you don't want the middle per of that to read "not included
as outlined in..." (which would make this second contradict or override
the later sections).)
Comment 1 Simon Pieters 2012-03-05 15:34:24 UTC
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Status: Accepted
Change Description: http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/html5/html4-differences/Overview.src.html.diff?r1=1.155;r2=1.156
Rationale: Concurred with reporter's comments