CVS WWW/2011/tracking-protection/drafts

Update of /w3ccvs/WWW/2011/tracking-protection/drafts
In directory gil:/tmp/cvs-serv12342

Modified Files:
	tracking-compliance.html 
Log Message:
first batch of editorial suggestions and corrections via fielding

--- /w3ccvs/WWW/2011/tracking-protection/drafts/tracking-compliance.html	2015/02/18 05:02:38	1.140
+++ /w3ccvs/WWW/2011/tracking-protection/drafts/tracking-compliance.html	2015/03/16 22:07:11	1.141
@@ -82,15 +82,16 @@
     express a preference to allow or limit online <a>tracking</a>. Complying
     with the user's preference as described in this document includes limits on
     the collection, retention and use of data collected as a <a>third party</a>
-    to <a title="user action">user actions</a>.</p>
+    to <a title="user action">user actions</a> and the sharing of data not 
+    <a>permanently deidentified</a>.</p>
 
     <p>This recommendation is intended for compliance with expressed user
     preferences via <a title="user agent">user agents</a> that (1) can access
     the general browsable Web; (2) have a user interface that satisfies the
     requirements in <a href=
     "http://www.w3.org/2011/tracking-protection/drafts/tracking-dnt.html#determining">
-    Determining User Preference</a> in the [[!TRACKING-DNT]] specification; (3)
-    and can implement all of the [[!TRACKING-DNT]] specification, including the
+    Determining User Preference</a> in the [[!TRACKING-DNT]] specification; and, (3)
+    can implement all of the [[!TRACKING-DNT]] specification, including the
     mechanisms for communicating a tracking status, and the user-granted
     exception mechanism.</p>
 
@@ -143,18 +144,6 @@
       page are examples of user actions.</p>
     </section>
 
-    <section id="subrequest">
-      <h3>Subrequest</h3>
-
-      <p>A <dfn>subrequest</dfn> is any network interaction that is not
-      directly initiated by user action. For example, an initial response in a
-      hypermedia format that contains embedded references to stylesheets,
-      images, frame sources, and onload actions will cause a browser, depending
-      on its capabilities and configuration, to perform a corresponding set of
-      automated subrequests to fetch those references using additional network
-      interactions.</p>
-    </section>
-
     <section id="party">
       <h3>Party</h3>
 
@@ -216,7 +205,7 @@
       prominent co-branding on the resource might lead a user to expect that
       multiple parties are responsible for the content or functionality.</p>
 
-      <p>Network interactions and subrequests related to a given user action
+      <p>Network interactions related to a given user action
       may not constitute intentional interaction when, for example, the user is
       unaware or only transiently informed of redirection or framed
       content.</p>
@@ -326,9 +315,6 @@
 
       <p>A party <dfn>shares</dfn> data if it transfers or provides a copy of
       data to any other party.</p>
-
-      <p>A party <dfn>facilitates</dfn> any other party’s collection of data if
-      it enables such party to collect data and engage in tracking.</p>
     </section>
   </section><!-- end definitions -->
 

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