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Comment Type: editorial
Comment (including rationale for proposed change):
The fourth bulleted item (\"How to meet\" links to information on intent..\") is hard to parse
Re-word the fourth bulleted item for readability, for instance \"Each success criteria contains links to how to meet that criteria\"
We have revised this item to read as follows:
"How to Meet" links to information about how to meet each success criterion, including a description of the intent of the success criterion, sufficient techniques for meeting it, examples, and benefits."