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Last updated on $Date: 2005/09/16 07:53:04 $ by $Author: shadi $
Notes as of 9 September, 2005
From discussions on the version of 7 September, 2005.
- [done] copyedit suggestions from Shawn Henry
- [done] reworded first paragraph according to suggestion
- [done] moved <h3> sections to <h2> level as suggested
- [done] matched page navigation titles to section headings
- [done] changed all section headings to lower case and removed numbering
- [done] revisted capitalization & ending punctuation
- [done] changed "step" to "task" where appropriate
- [done] copyedit suggestion from Andrew Arch
- changed the word "tab" to "navigate" so that it reflects the action rather than the keyboard key
- [done] copyedit suggestions from Pasquale Popolizio
- [done] revisited "Firefox", "e.g." and some other punctuation suggestions
- [done] reworded "tab" to "navigate" to clarify meaning, added "tab" as an example
Notes as of 24 June, 2005
From discussions on the version of 21 June, 2005.
- [done] increase caution level that review should not be used for conformance evaluation
- caution is now bolded
- [done] "it does not include every aspect of a Web site" add: "and not every checkpoint"
- "checkpoint" may be too jargony at this stage, added "accessibility aspect of a Web site"
- [done] refer to toolbar evalution tools in section 2 (for some of the checks)
- added note at the end of section 2 with links to some example toolbar tools
Notes as of 1 April, 2005
From discussions on the version of 30 March, 2005.
- [done] remove the number "1" from the introduction section
- [done] step 5, bullet 1: replace "best practices" with "positive aspects"
- [done] step 5, bullet 3: link text "conformance evaluation" to the actual document
- [done] consider adding Safari to the list of browsers
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