List of comments on “ODRL Version 2.1 Core Model | ODRL Community Group” (dated 16 September 2014)

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editorial comments

Comment LC-2993: Commenter: Renato Iannella <ri@semanticidentity.com> (archived message); Context: 2.5 Duty; Status:
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A small editorial update for the Core Model spec [1].

After the "payment" change from asset to constraint, we have inadvertently left this text in section 2.5 Duty (in the forth bullet point):

"For example, a compensate Action must be linked to a target Asset that indicates the amount to pay."

I recommend we update this text to:

"For example, a nextPolicy Action must be linked to the identifier of a target policy Asset"

Cheers...
Renato Iannella
Semantic Identity
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[1] http://www.w3.org/community/odrl/work/2-0-core-model-constraint-draft-changes/; Related issues: (space separated ids); WG Notes:; Resolution: Accepted; (Please make sure the resolution is adapted for public consumption)