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Comment LC-2196

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Commenter: Simon Parker <simon.parker@polarlake.com>

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[Free text description]Document as a wholeEfficient XML Interchange (EXI) Format 1.0 /**/ code... Efficient XML Interchange (EXI) Format 1.0 W3C Working Draft 28 July 2008 Abstract Status of this Document Table of Contents Appendices 1. Introduction [Definition:]   [Definition:]   [Definition:]   1.1 History and Design 1.2 Notational Conventions and Terminology [Definition:]   2. Design Principles 3. Basic Concepts 4. EXI Streams [Definition:]   [Definition:]   [Definition:]   [Definition:]   [Definition:]   [Definition:]   [Definition:]   4. EXI Streams [Definition:]  An EXI stream is an EXI heade... 4. EXI Streams [Definition:]  An EXI stream is an EXI heade... name prefix local-element-ns public qname system text uri value 5. EXI Header [Definition:]   5.1 EXI Cookie [Definition:]   5.2 Distinguishing Bits [Definition:]   5.3 EXI Format Version [Definition:]   Example 5-1. EXI Format Version Examples 5.4 EXI Options [Definition:]   [Definition:]   [Definition:]   [Definition:]   [Definition:]   [Definition:]   [Definition:]   [Definition:]   [Definition:]   [Definition:]   [Definition:]   [Definition:]   [Definition:]   [Definition:]   [Definition:]   [Definition:]   6. Encoding EXI Streams [Definition:]   6.1 Determining Event Codes Example 6-1. Example productions with event codes 6.2 Representing Event Codes Example 6-2. Example event code encoding 6.3 Fidelity Options Preserve.prefixes Preserve.lexicalValues 7. Representing Event Content [Definition:]   7. Representing Event Content The content of each event in... 7. Representing Event Content The content of each event in... 7.1 Built-in EXI Datatype Representations 7.1.1 Binary 7.1.2 Boolean 7.1.3 Decimal 7.1.4 Float 7.1.5 Integer 7.1.6 Unsigned Integer Example 7-1. Example algorithm for decoding an Unsigned Inte... 7.1.7 QName 7.1.8 Date-Time 7.1.9 n-bit Unsigned Integer 7.1.10 String 7.1.10.1 Restricted Character Sets 7.1.11 List 7.2 Enumerations 7.3 String Table 7.3.1 String Table Partitions [Definition:]   7.3.2 Partitions Optimized for Frequent use of Compact Identifiers 7.3.3 Partitions Optimized for Frequent use of String Literals 7.4 Datatype Representation Map [Definition:]   Example 7-2. datatypeRepresentationMap indicating all Decima... Example 7-3. datatypeRepresentationMap illustrating a user-d... 8. EXI Grammars 8.1 Grammar Notation 8.1.1 Fixed Event Codes Example 8-1. Example productions with fixed event codes 8.1.2 Variable Event Codes Example 8-2. Example productions that use macro non-terminal... Example 8-3. Example non-terminal macros and its productions... Example 8-4. Expanded productions equivalent to the producti... 8.2 Grammar Event Codes Example 8-5. Example productions with event codes 8.3 Pruning Unneeded Productions Example 8-6. Example productions with full fidelity Example 8-7. Example productions after pruning 8.4 Built-in XML Grammars 8.4.1 Built-in Document Grammar 8.4.2 Built-in Fragment Grammar 8.4.3 Built-in Element Grammar [Definition:]   8.5 Schema-informed Grammars 8.5.1 Schema-informed Document Grammar 8.5.2 Schema-informed Fragment Grammar 8.5.3 Schema-informed Element Fragment Grammar 8.5.4 Schema-informed Element and Type Grammars [Definition:]   [Definition:]   8.5.4.1 EXI Proto-Grammars 8.5.4.1.1 Grammar Concatenation Operator 8.5.4.1.2 Element Grammars 8.5.4.1.3 Type Grammars 8.5.4.1.3.1 SimpleType Grammars 8.5.4.1.3.2 Complex Type Grammars 8.5.4.1.3.3 Complex Ur-Type Grammar 8.5.4.1.4 Attribute Uses 8.5.4.1.5 Particles 8.5.4.1.6 Element Terms 8.5.4.1.7 Wildcard Terms 8.5.4.1.8 Model Group Terms 8.5.4.1.8.1 Sequence Model Groups 8.5.4.1.8.2 Choice Model Groups 8.5.4.1.8.3 All Model Groups 8.5.4.2 EXI Normalized Grammars 8.5.4.2.1 Eliminating Productions with no Terminal Symbol 8.5.4.2.2 Eliminating Duplicate Terminal Symbols 8.5.4.3 Event Code Assignment 8.5.4.4 Undeclared Productions 8.5.4.4.1 Adding Productions when Strict is False Like an element, an attribute may occur in a schema-invalid... 8.5.4.4.2 Adding Productions when Strict is True 9. EXI Compression 9.1 Blocks 9.2 Channels 9.2.1 Structure Channel 9.2.2 Value Channels 9.3 Compressed Streams 10. Conformance 10.1 EXI Stream Conformance [Definition:]   [Definition:]   [Definition:]   10.2 EXI Processor Conformance A References A.1 Normative References IETF RFC 1951 IETF RFC 2119 ISO/IEC 10646 Unicode Database XML 1.0 XML Information Set XML Schema Structures XML Schema Datatypes A.2 Other References Efficient XML EXI Measurements Note EXI Primer EXI Evaluation Greibach Normal Form Huffman Coding ISO/IEC 19757-2:2003 SOAP 1.2 XBC Measurement Methodologies XBC Use Cases XBC Properties B Infoset Mapping B.1 Document Information Item B.2 Element Information Items B.3 Attribute Information Item B.4 Processing Instruction Information Item B.5 Unexpanded Entity Reference Information item B.6 Character Information item B.7 Comment Information item B.8 Document Type Declaration Information item B.9 Unparsed Entity Information Item B.10 Notation Information Item B.11 Namespace Information Item C XML Schema for EXI Options Header D Initial Entries in String Table Partitions D.1 Initial Entries in Uri Partition D.2 Initial Entries in Prefix Partitions D.3 Initial Entries in Local-Name Partitions E Deriving Character Sets from XML Schema Regular Expressions E Deriving Character Sets from XML Schema Regular Expressio... F Example Encoding (Non-Normative) G Schema-informed Grammar Examples (Non-Normative) Example G-1. Example XML Schema fragment G.1 Proto-Grammar Examples   Term_description   Term_description 0 :...   Term_description   Term_description 0 :...   Term_description   Term_description 0 :...   Particle_description   Term_description ...   Particle_quantity   Term_quantity 0 :...   Particle_quantity   Term_quantity 0 :...   Term_sequence   Term_description0 :...   Particle_sequence   Term_description0,0...   Use_sku   Use_sku 0 : AT("sku") Use_...   Use_sku   Use_sku 0 : AT("sku") Use_...   ProtoG_ProductElement   Use_color 0 :...   ProtoG_OrderElement   Term_prod... G.2 Normalized Grammar Examples   NormG_ProductElement Event Code Use_col...   NormG_ProductElement Event Code Use_col... G.3 Complete Grammar Examples   CompleteG_ProductElement Event Code Use...   CompleteG_ProductElement Event Code Use... H Recent Specification Changes (Non-Normative) H.1 Changes from Third Public Working Draft H.2 Changes from Second Public Working Draft H.3 Changes from First Public Working Draft I Acknowledgements (Non-Normative)
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open proposal pending resolved_yes resolved_no resolved_partial other assigned to Nobody Bournez, Carine Brutzman, Don Cokus, Michael Fernández, Javier D. Heuer, Joerg Käbisch, Sebastian Kamiya, Takuki Kuntschke, Richard Matsukura, Ryuichi McGregor, Don Peintner, Daniel Quin, Liam Shah, Grishma ZERGAOUI, Mohamed

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5.4 EXI Options
Last paragraph, definition of valuePartitionCapacity option
Replace "enitiries" with "entries"

_Last paragraph before 6.1
Replace "effect " by "affect"

_Introductory paragraph of 8.5 Schema-informed grammars
Replace "schema-deviated" with "schema-derived"

_8.5.4.1.6 Element Terms
Replace "itself if was" with "itself if it was"

_10 Conformance
Review use of English throughout this section, particularly:
plural and singular forms, and
the phrase "that EXI stream decoders are prepared with"

_B.1 Document Information Item
[unparsed entities] Delete the last occurrence of "to".

_B.11 Namespace Information Item
Replace "ismaps toa NS event" with "maps to a NS event"

_E Deriving Character Sets from XML Schema Regular Expressions
In sentence 2 replace "lexically matches" with "lexically match"

_E Deriving Character Sets from XML Schema Regular Expressions
In the notes on rules [3] and [4] replace "causes to conclude the
charset of the regExp"
with "causes the charset of the regExp"

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Resolution: The EXI WG is grateful for your interest in the EXI documents, your attention to the language details in particluar, and the time and care to report them back to us. It will surely make a difference, and such a report is valuable to the continuous effort of improving the quality of EXI deliverables. We have worked on the suggested changes in our internal editor's draft copy of the documents. You will see the changes in the public draft when the documents are published next time around. There is one suggestion in your report that might have been a result of confusion. The wording of "Schema-deviated" in section "8.5 Schema-informed grammars" was indeed meant to be phrased that way. To make the intent clearer, we plan to modify the sentence as follows. "Of particular note is that built-in grammars that are invoked for schema-invalid occurrences of elements or the elements that matched either SE(*) or SE(uri:*) but are not declared in the schema are still subject to dynamic grammar learning during the rest of the EXI stream processing as is described in 8.4.2 Built-in Fragment Grammar. "

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