Error in text replacement or deletion?

Name: Sylvie Duchateau
Email: sylvie.duchateau@snv.jussieu.fr
Affiliation: Association BrailleNet
Document: UW
Item Number: Understanding Success Criterion 1.4.5
Part of Item: Intent
Comment Type: editorial
Summary of Issue: Error in text replacement or deletion?
Comment (Including rationale for any proposed change):
The first sentence of the intent of Understanding 1.4.5 does not make sense to me as it seems that previous text has not been deleted. It says: "The intent of this Success Criterion is to encourage authors, who are using technologies which are capable of achieving a specifictheir desired default
visual presentation, to enable people who require a particular visual presentation of text to be able to adjust the text presentation as needed. 

Proposed Change:
Modify "capable of achieving a specifictheir desired default
visual presentation," to make it understandable.

Received on Wednesday, 3 August 2011 10:29:50 UTC