Re: ACTION-76 completed - clarify same-document reference, change URI reference

Completed change for ACTION-76 to fix red-line for URI reference in  
XML Signature and Decryption Transform, also fix to red-line in place  
where RFC 2396 was changed to 3986 in XML Signature section 4.3.3.1,  
The URI Attribute.

http://www.w3.org/2007/xmlsec/Drafts/xmldsig-core/#sec-URI (refresh)

http://www.w3.org/2007/xmlsec/Drafts/xmldsig-core/#ref-URI

http://www.w3.org/2007/xmlsec/Drafts/xmlenc-decrypt/#URI

regards, Frederick

Frederick Hirsch
Nokia


On Aug 7, 2007, at 1:28 PM, Frederick Hirsch wrote:

> comments inline
>
> regards, Frederick
>
> Frederick Hirsch
> Nokia
>
>
> On Aug 7, 2007, at 12:00 PM, ext Thomas Roessler wrote:
>
>> I wonder if the mention of same-document references in 4.3.3.1 is
>> really needed...  I don't see "same-document" used in that section,
>> so keeping that change to 4.3.3.2 should be enough.
>>
>
> I added it since a reference to URI is provided yet would be  
> misleading if the reader were not considering the change to same- 
> document references.
>
>
>> There don't seem to be change marks in the references, and in the
>> various places where 2396 used to be mentioned in the text.
>>
> arghh. I will go back and edit this again. Thanks for spotting this.
>
>> Also, [URI-Literal] (RFC 2732) is obsoleted by 3986 as well, so the
>> change of normative reference for [URI] probably entails some other
>> changes to the text toward the end of the first paragraph of
>> 4.3.3.1, and to that reference.  (Apologies for not having spotted
>> that earlier.)
>
> Thanks will review
>>
>> Tuning out into vacation mode again.
>>
>> Cheers,
>> -- 
>> Thomas Roessler, W3C  <tlr@w3.org>
>>
>>
>>
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>>
>>
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>> On 2007-08-07 11:42:56 -0400, Frederick Hirsch wrote:
>>> From: Frederick Hirsch <frederick.hirsch@nokia.com>
>>> To: XMLSec <public-xmlsec-maintwg@w3.org>
>>> Cc: Hirsch Frederick <frederick.hirsch@nokia.com>
>>> Date: Tue, 7 Aug 2007 11:42:56 -0400
>>> Subject: ACTION-76 completed - clarify same-document reference,  
>>> change URI reference
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>>>
>>> ACTION-77 completed - Make changes to document to (a) clarify  
>>> same-document
>>> URI reference, (b) change reference to URI
>>>
>>> http://www.w3.org/2007/xmlsec/Drafts/xmldsig-core/ (refresh)
>>>
>>> see
>>> http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Member/member-xmlsec-commits/2007Aug/ 
>>> 0020.html
>>>
>>> Changed reference for URI from RFC 2396 to RFC 3986.
>>> Changed references to 2396 to 3986 in text.
>>> Update 1st sentence of 4.3.3.1 The URI Attribute to clarify same- 
>>> document
>>> reference.
>>> http://www.w3.org/2007/xmlsec/Drafts/xmldsig-core/#sec-URI
>>>
>>> Update same-document reference  in 4.3.3.2 The Reference  
>>> Processing Model to
>>> "In this specification, a 'same-document' reference is defined as a
>>> URI-Reference that consists of hash sign ('#') followed by  
>>> fragment or or
>>> alternatively consists of an empty URI [URI].".  Tweak following two
>>> paragraphs for clarity.
>>> http://www.w3.org/2007/xmlsec/Drafts/xmldsig-core/#sec- 
>>> ReferenceProcessingModel
>>>
>>> Also updated URI reference in Decryption Transform
>>> http://www.w3.org/2007/xmlsec/Drafts/xmlenc-decrypt/#URI
>>>
>>> see
>>> http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Member/member-xmlsec-commits/2007Aug/ 
>>> 0019.html
>>>
>>> regards, Frederick
>>>
>>> Frederick Hirsch
>>> Nokia
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>
>

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