Remarks on W3C Editor's Draft 24 January 2008 (first part)

Dear,

== Serialization ==


In 5.6 p:serialization, Please allow normalization-form to be also any
NMToken (as defined later in 7.3)

"include-content-type" is html and xhtml specific, since only xml is
supported why keeping it ?
Same for "escape-uri-attributes"

I would rather have "use-character-maps", but may be it is a V.next option

== Typos ==

s/must support be supported/must be supported/ (die hard one...)
s/assocaited/associated/
s/associed/associated/
s/evaulated/evaluated/
s/implemention/implementation/
s/intepretation/interpretation/
s/occured/occurred/
s/preceeded/preceded/
s/preceeding/preceding/
s/priviliges/privileges/
s/retreive/retrieve/
s/retreived/retrieved/
s/stype types/step types/

== http://www.w3.org/ns/1.0 ==

Two things :
if it is not a namespace please remove "/ns" from this string
And please add a reference to xproc
I would rather prefer to have
"http://www.w3.org/xproc/1.0"

== Reference ==
Replace
[[
[RELAX NG] ISO/IEC JTC 1/SC 34. ISO/IEC FDIS 19757-2:2002(E) Document Schema
Definition Languages (DSDL) — Part 2: Grammar-based validation — RELAX NG
2002.
]]
by
[[
[RELAX NG] ISO/IEC JTC 1/SC 34. ISO/IEC 19757-2:2003(E) Document Schema
Definition Languages (DSDL) — Part 2: Grammar-based validation — RELAX NG
2003.
]]
--
Replace
[[
 [Schematron] ISO/IEC JTC 1/SC 34. ISO/IEC FDIS 19757-2:2002(E) Document
Schema Definition Languages (DSDL) — Part 3: Rule-based validation —
Schematron 2004.
]]
by
[[
 [Schematron] ISO/IEC JTC 1/SC 34. ISO/IEC 19757-3:2006(E) Document Schema
Definition Languages (DSDL) — Part 3: Rule-based validation — Schematron
2006.
]]
--

Please use the reference "[Serialization]" or full name instead of "[XML
Serialization]"
--
Replace
[[
[RFC 1521] RFC 1521: MIME (Multipurpose Internet Mail Extensions) Part One:
Mechanisms for Specifying and Describing the Format of Internet Message
Bodies. N. Borenstein, N. Freed, editors. Internet Engineering Task Force.
September, 2003.
]]
by
[[
[RFC 1521] RFC 1521: MIME (Multipurpose Internet Mail Extensions) Part One:
Mechanisms for Specifying and Describing the Format of Internet Message
Bodies. N. Borenstein, N. Freed, editors. Internet Engineering Task Force.
September, 1993.
]]

Mohamed
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