Re: What is "wide review"

On 7/21/2013 12:20 AM, Charles McCathie Nevile wrote:
> On Wed, 10 Jul 2013 13:12:33 -0700, Charles McCathie Nevile 
> <chaals@yandex-team.ru> wrote:
>
>> On Thu, 11 Jul 2013 01:27:28 +0500, Jeff Jaffe <jeff@w3.org> wrote:
>>
>>> Charles,
>>>
>>> I haven't gotten to the review of the entire revised Chapter 7, but 
>>> in-line are some suggestions on the wide review piece.
>>
>> Thanks...
>>
>>> On 7/8/2013 8:08 AM, Charles McCathie Nevile wrote:
>>>> close ACTION-1
>>>>
>>>> After a discussion, I propose to add the following text to my 
>>>> proposal for chapter 7, as section 7.2.2
>>>>
>>>> [[[
>>>> The requirements for wide review are not precisely defined by the 
>>>> process.
>>>
>>> insert: However, the general objective is to ensure that the entire 
>>> set of stakeholders of the Web community, including the general 
>>> public, have had adequate notice of the progress of the Working 
>>> Group and thereby an opportunity to comment on the specification.
>>
>> I think the "However" is unnecessary but I like the rest. Unless 
>> somebody screams I expect to add it.
>
> and done.
>
>> [...]
>>>> A Working Group could present evidence that wide review has been 
>>>> received, irrespective of solicitation. But it is important to note 
>>>> that many detailed reviews is
>>>
>>> s/is/are/
>>
>> no, but s/that/that receiving/
>
> done
>
>>>> not necessarily the same as wide review, since it
>>>
>>> s/it/they/
>>
>> yep
>
> done
>
>>>> may only represent comment from a small segment of the relevant 
>>>> stakeholder community.
>>>> ]]]
>>>>
>>>> The goal is to set some expectations for what kind of review needs 
>>>> to occur, without constraining the definition to the point that 
>>>> invites "process-lawyering"...
>>>
>>> I agree with this goal.  But I also think that it would be helpful 
>>> to give a specific example of what is generally viewed as 
>>> sufficient, since otherwise it may be confusing for W3C novices. For 
>>> example, you can add:
>>>
>>> "While the W3C Process does not constrain the definition of getting 
>>> public review, here is one example of what would be sufficient.  If 
>>> the Working Group determines that they have completed their work and 
>>> are ready to enter LCCR, they could publicly announce that they 
>>> intend to enter LCCR in four weeks and indicate to other Working 
>>> Groups and the public that any additional comments should be 
>>> provided within that time.  Such a formal method might not be needed 
>>> for a group that generally has received wide review for their spec, 
>>> but it is a safe-harbor method for those groups that have not 
>>> adequately engaged outside of their group."
>>
>> Yep. I expect not to use that exact text, but big chunks of it at least.
>
> I added the statement that many working groups do this in the middle 
> of the paragraph... do you think that's enough?

Yes, except that you call it Last Call, rather than LCCR :).

>
>
> cheers
>
> Chaals
>
>> In particular, I really don't like the final clause.
>>
>> cheers
>>
>> Chaals
>>
>
>

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