rewriting abstract -- Re: Group Note FPWD is done from Jose M. Alonso on 2009-03-30 (public-egov-ig@w3.org from March 2009)

From: Jose M. Alonso <josema@w3.org>
Date: Mon, 30 Mar 2009 19:02:07 +0200
To: Trond Arne Undheim <trond-arne.undheim@oracle.com>
Cc: eGov IG <public-egov-ig@w3.org>, Kevin Novak <kevinnovak@aia.org>
Message-Id: <46EE02EE-193F-4D3D-BA39-6E6333D18914@w3.org>

> ...
>
> 	• I feel the abstract is quite weak. If we cannot deliver stronger  
> conclusions, we should re-work the document and re-think.

Opening ISSUE-13

Agree we need a stronger abstract. IIRC, probably my fault, and I'm  
sure Kevin would do a great job on re-writing it once document closer  
to final status.

-- Jose

Received on Monday, 30 March 2009 17:02:56 UTC