ISSUE-2119: Grammatical suggestion in Linking section
grammaro in linking
Grammatical suggestion in Linking section
- State:
- CLOSED
- Product:
- SVG 1.2 Tiny: Last Call
- Raised by:
- Doug Schepers
- Opened on:
- 2008-10-13
- Description:
- Helder Magalhães
<http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/www-svg/2008Oct/0107.html>:
[[
6. Grammatical suggestion in Linking section [LINKING]
In subsection "14.3.2 SVG fragment identifiers", the verb to replace
doesn't seem to be properly conjugated (plus a minor suggestion).
Current wording:
An SVG fragment identifier must match the specified grammar. To ensure
robust content it is recommended that spaces between numeric values be
omitted or replace with percent encoded strings or commas as
appropriate.
Proposed change:
An SVG fragment identifier must match the specified grammar. To ensure
robust content it is recommended that spaces between numeric values
are omitted or replaced with percent encoded strings or commas as
appropriate.
I believe there's nothing wrong with the verb to be ("be" changed for
"are") - I guess it is a matter of preference. :-)
[LINKING] http://www.w3.org/TR/SVGMobile12/linking.html
]] - Related Actions Items:
- No related actions
- Related emails:
- SVG/profiles/1.2T doc-svgt12.html,NONE,1.1 (from cvsmail@w3.org on 2008-10-28)
- Re: [1.2T-LC] Comments and suggestions, mainly regarding the Linking section (ISSUE-2116, ISSUE-2117, ISSUE-2118, ISSUE-2119, ISSUE-2120) (from helder.magalhaes@gmail.com on 2008-10-14)
- Re: [1.2T-LC] Comments and suggestions, mainly regarding the Linking section (ISSUE-2116, ISSUE-2117, ISSUE-2118, ISSUE-2119, ISSUE-2120) (from schepers@w3.org on 2008-10-13)
- SVG/profiles/1.2T/publish index.html,1.102,1.103 linking.html,1.93,1.94 single-page.html,1.102,1.103 (from cvsmail@w3.org on 2008-10-13)
- SVG/profiles/1.2T/publish/examples 17_01.svg,1.2,1.3 (from cvsmail@w3.org on 2008-10-13)
- SVG/profiles/1.2T/master index.html,1.51,1.52 linking.html,1.113,1.114 (from cvsmail@w3.org on 2008-10-13)
- Re: [1.2T-LC] Comments and suggestions, mainly regarding the Linking section (from schepers@w3.org on 2008-10-13)
- ISSUE-2119 (grammaro in linking): Grammatical suggestion in Linking section [Last Call: SVG 1.2 Tiny ] (from sysbot+tracker@w3.org on 2008-10-13)
Related notes:
Clarified and corrected to say:
[[
An SVG fragment identifier must match the specified grammar.
To ensure robust content, authors are recommended to omit spaces between numeric
values, or replace these spaces with percent-encoded strings or commas as
appropriate.
]]
Changed as requested. Commenter satisfied: http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/www-svg/2008Oct/0141.html, http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/www-svg/2008Oct/0158.html
Doug Schepers, 16 Oct 2008, 21:07:28Display change log
