ISSUE-390: Editorial remarks
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Editorial remarks
- State:
- CLOSED
- Product:
- TTML IMSC 1.0
- Raised by:
- Pierre-Anthony Lemieux
- Opened on:
- 2015-06-11
- Description:
- From https://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-tt/2015Jun/0001.html
> In constrast [sic] to this specification,
contrast
> Unless specified otherwise,a Document Instance SHALL conform to the following:
Please insert a space after ","
> if an identical image is present in Decoded Image Buffer Dn, copy the image from Decoded Image Buffer Dn to the Presentation Buffer Pn using the Image Copier; or
You should probably capitalize "If"
> if an identical image is present in Decoded Image Buffer Dn-1, i.e. an identical image was present in intermediate synchronic document En-1, copy using the Image Copier the glyph from Decoded Image Buffer Dn-1 to both the Decoded Image Buffer Dn and the Presentation Buffer Pn; or
You may capitalize "If" ...
> Otherwise, decode the image using the Image Decoder the image into the Presentation Buffer Pn and Decoded Image Buffer Dn.
You did capitalize "Otherwise"...
> Ic is the set of images copied when painting intermediate synchronic document En
> Id is the set of images decoded when painting intermediate synchronic document En
> IDec is the image decoding rate
> ICpy is the normalized image copy performance factor.
Why is there only one period (and no other punctuation) here?
> if an identical glyph is present in Glyph Buffer Gn, copy the glyph from Glyph Buffer Gn to the Presentation Buffer Pn using the Glyph Copier; or
You should probably capitalize "If"
> if an identical glyph is present in Glyph Buffer Gn-1, i.e. an identical glyph was present in intermediate synchronic document En-1, copy using the Glyph Copier the glyph from Glyph Buffer Gn-1 to both the Glyph Buffer Gn and the Presentation Buffer Pn; or
You may capitalize "If" ...
> Otherwise render using the Glyph Renderer the glyph into the Presentation Buffer Pn and Glyph Buffer Gn using the corresponding style information.
You did capitalize "Otherwise"...
> Gr is the set of glyphs rendered into the Presentation Buffer Pn using the Glyph Renderer in intermediate synchronic document En.
> Gc is the set of glyphs copied to the Presentation Buffer Pn using the Glyph Copier in intermediate synchronic document En.
> Ren(Gi) is the text rendering performance factor glyph Gi
> GCpy is the normalized glyph copy performance factor
2/4 end in periods...
> U+00A0 - U+00FF (Number Forms)
> U+2153 – U+215F : Fractions
What is the meaningful difference between your use of "-" and "–" above? - Related Actions Items:
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- Re: [minutes] TTWG call june 18th 2015 (from silviapfeiffer1@gmail.com on 2015-06-19)
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- [minutes] TTWG call june 18th 2015 (from tmichel@w3.org on 2015-06-18)
- {minutes} TTWG Meeting 2015-06-11 (from nigel.megitt@bbc.co.uk on 2015-06-11)
- Re: [imsc] CR: TTML Text and Image Profiles for Internet Media Subtitles and Captions 1.0 (from pal@sandflow.com on 2015-06-11)
- ISSUE-390 (editrem): Editorial remarks [TTML IMSC 1.0] (from sysbot+tracker@w3.org on 2015-06-11)
Related notes:
Editorial pass at https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/ttml/rev/86304187c3b2
Pierre-Anthony Lemieux, 11 Jun 2015, 05:28:26Futher tweaks at https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/ttml/rev/07fda09985c1
Pierre-Anthony Lemieux, 11 Jun 2015, 14:28:32Display change log