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Commenter: Renato Iannella <ri@semanticidentity.com>

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[Free text description]Document as a whole1. Overview 2. ODRL Core Model 2.1 Policy 2.1.1 Inheritance 2.1.2 Profile 2.2 Asset 2.3.1 Role 2.3 Party 2.4 Permission 2.5 Duty 2.6 Prohibition 2.7 Action 2.8 Constraint 3. Scenarios (Informative) 4. Experimental Features (Informative) 4.1 Extended Relations 4.2 Abstract Policy Expression 4.3 Remedies Change History Acknowledgements References
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open proposal pending resolved_yes resolved_no resolved_partial other assigned to Nobody Abdel-Rahman, Hassan Ai, Lu Arnab, Alapan Becker, Stefan Beynet, Yannick Birmingham, James Cave, Francis Chaney, Dennis CHOUKRI, Khalid Clark, Sheena Colin, Jean-Noel Compton, Dave Delgado, Jaime Desmontils, Emmanuel Earley, Jim Fornara, Nicoletta Gauss II, Ray Großer, Katharina Guth-Orlowski, Susanne Guth-Orlowski, Susanne Hickson, William holborn, timothy Howard, Roger Hück, Benjamin Iannella, Renato Isaac, Antoine Jafari, Mohammad Kapoor, Amit Kasten, Andreas Kirrane, Sabrina Knygar, Ya Lewis, David Lewis, Lucinda Llorente, Silvia McRoberts, Mo Mihindukulasooriya, Nandana Myles, Stuart Öberg, Jonas Pähler, Daniel Paschke, Adrian Perego, Andrea Polleres, Axel Quinn, Brendan Rodríguez-Doncel, Víctor Schumacher, Greg Sedlik, Jeff Steyskal, Simon Suarez-Figueroa, Mari Carmen Tournié, Stéphane ukadike, kemi Villata, Serena Vowles, Graham Wenning, Rigo White, Ben Wilkinson, Simon

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A small editorial update for the Core Model spec [1].

After the "payment" change from asset to constraint, we have inadvertently left this text in section 2.5 Duty (in the forth bullet point):

"For example, a compensate Action must be linked to a target Asset that indicates the amount to pay."

I recommend we update this text to:

"For example, a nextPolicy Action must be linked to the identifier of a target policy Asset"

Cheers...
Renato Iannella
Semantic Identity
http://semanticidentity.com
Mobile: +61 4 1313 2206

[1] http://www.w3.org/community/odrl/work/2-0-core-model-constraint-draft-changes/

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Resolution: Accepted

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