ISSUE-13: rewriting abstract to make it stronger
abstract
rewriting abstract to make it stronger
- State:
- CLOSED
- Product:
- Group Note 1 -- General
- Raised by:
- Trond Arne Undheim
- Opened on:
- 2009-03-30
- Description:
- Abstract is quite weak. If we cannot deliver stronger conclusions, we should re-work the document and re-think.
- Related Actions Items:
- No related actions
- Related emails:
- Re: 'Improving Access to Government through Better Use of the Web' review comments (from josema@w3.org on 2009-04-23)
- RE: 'Improving Access to Government through Better Use of the Web' review comments (from Anna.Zhuang@nokia.com on 2009-04-22)
- Re: 'Improving Access to Government through Better Use of the Web' review comments (from josema@w3.org on 2009-04-21)
- Re: 'Improving Access to Government through Better Use of the Web' review comments (from josema@w3.org on 2009-04-20)
- rewriting abstract -- Re: Group Note FPWD is done (from josema@w3.org on 2009-03-30)
- ISSUE-13 (abstract): rewriting abstract to make it stronger [Group Note 1 -- General] (from sysbot+tracker@w3.org on 2009-03-30)
Related notes:
agreed, Suzanne and Sharron also now onboard. Kevin and Sharron actioned to do this, see ACTION-59 and ACTION-60
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