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Bug 8166 - Eventing: remove "we"
Summary: Eventing: remove "we"
Status: CLOSED REMIND
Alias: None
Product: WS-Resource Access
Classification: Unclassified
Component: Eventing (show other bugs)
Version: LC
Hardware: PC Windows XP
: P2 trivial
Target Milestone: ---
Assignee: Doug Davis
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Reported: 2009-11-03 20:45 UTC by Doug Davis
Modified: 2009-12-08 22:22 UTC (History)
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Description Doug Davis 2009-11-03 20:45:30 UTC 
2.4 says:
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We use the term "subscription manager" in this specification to refer to the Web service that manages the subscription, whether it is the event source itself or some separate Web service. 
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The use of the term "we" is poor wording for a spec.

Proposal:
change:
We use the term "subscription manager" in this specification to refer to...

to:
The term "subscription manager" in this specification refers to...
Comment 1 Doug Davis 2009-11-06 22:55:30 UTC 
The term "subscription manager" is used in this specification to refer to...
Comment 2 Robert Freund 2009-11-06 22:56:42 UTC 
Resolved with comment 2