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Bug 5144 - small editorial changes section 3.8.6-3.15.1
Summary: small editorial changes section 3.8.6-3.15.1
Status: CLOSED FIXED
Alias: None
Product: XML Schema
Classification: Unclassified
Component: Structures: XSD Part 1 (show other bugs)
Version: 1.1 only
Hardware: PC Windows XP
: P4 minor
Target Milestone: ---
Assignee: C. M. Sperberg-McQueen
QA Contact: XML Schema comments list
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Whiteboard: editorial cluster
Keywords: resolved
Depends on:
Blocks:
 
Reported: 2007-10-08 16:26 UTC by John Arwe
Modified: 2008-03-20 12:39 UTC (History)
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Description John Arwe 2007-10-08 16:26:10 UTC
3.8.6 Constraints on Model Group Schema Components, Schema Component Constraint: Element Declarations Consistent
from: "If the {particles} contains, either directly, indirectly "
to:   "If     {particles} contains, either directly, indirectly "
twice...first line under heading, and first line after item 4

3.8.6 Constraints on Model Group Schema Components, Schema Component Constraint: Unique Particle Attribution
first 2 notes indented too far

3.9.4.1 Principles of Validation against Particles
from: "(Language Recognition for Repetitions (§3.9.4.1  )) describes how "
to:   "(Language Recognition for Repetitions (§3.9.4.1.1)) describes how "

3.11.1 The Identity-constraint Definition Schema Component
from the heading through the unordered list, there are a number of instances of "identity-constraint definition" in mid-sentence with an initial capital I, ie
"Identity-constraint definition".  Change to lower case i.  I counted 4 spots.

3.11.1 The Identity-constraint Definition Schema Component
"{fields} specifies XPath expressions relative to each element selected by a {selector}. This must identify a single node"
"This" is ambiguous.  Assuming I am right in thinking you meant it to refer to {fields} not {selector}...
from: "This                                          must"
to:   "Each {field} Xpath expression property record must"

3.11.4 Identity-constraint Definition Validation Rules
"Note: The use of [schema actual value]..."
indentation makes it look like it applies to 4.3.  I think it applies to 3, recommend moving it in-line.  If it is not moved, indent left by a smaller amount.

3.13.1 The Assertion Schema Component, bullet #4, 
remove final period (1 of 2 currently there)

3.13.6, Schema Component Constraint: Test Value OK, item 4
"production" occurs 2x sequentially, remove 1

3.15.1 The Annotation Schema Component
"A sequence of Element infoitems"
from: "infoitems"
to:   "information items"
_3_ times - 2x elements, 1x attributes
Comment 1 C. M. Sperberg-McQueen 2008-02-04 16:17:25 UTC
In an effort to make better use of Bugzilla, we are going to use the
'severity' field to classify issues by perceived difficulty.  This 
bug is getting severity=minor to reflect the existing whiteboard note
'easy'. 
Comment 2 C. M. Sperberg-McQueen 2008-03-08 01:02:10 UTC
A wording proposal intended to resolve this issue was sent to the XML Schema
WG on 7 March 2008.
http://www.w3.org/XML/Group/2004/06/xmlschema-1/structures.omni-200803b.html
(member-only link).  It makes most, but not all, of the changes suggested;
the status section lists the changes not made and gives some indication why 
not. Those interested in this issue are encouraged to review the proposal
and to comment on it if they wish.
Comment 3 Sandy Gao 2008-03-17 20:51:45 UTC
At its telcon on 2008-03-14, the XML Schema WG adopted the wording proposal at http://www.w3.org/XML/Group/2004/06/xmlschema-1/structures.omni-200803b.html (member-only link), and believes this issue now to be resolved.  

John, please let us know if you agree with this resolution of your issue, by adding a comment to the issue record and changing the Status of the issue to Closed. Or, if you do not agree with this resolution, please add a comment explaining why. If you wish to appeal the WG's decision to the Director, then also change the Status of the record to Reopened. If you wish to record your dissent, but do not wish to appeal the decision to the Director, then change the Status of the record to Closed. If we do not hear from you in the next two weeks, we will assume you agree with the WG decision.
Comment 4 John Arwe 2008-03-19 18:58:22 UTC
You missed this change:
3.15.1 The Annotation Schema Component
"A sequence of Element infoitems"
from: "infoitems"
to:   "information items"
_3_ times - 2x elements, 1x attributes

Comment 5 C. M. Sperberg-McQueen 2008-03-19 21:32:26 UTC
W.r.t. comment #4 on "infoitem" ==> "information item".

This is slightly puzzling, since I remember clearly making the necessary
change.  

The current version of the status-quo document, on the other hand,
at http://www.w3.org/XML/Group/2004/06/xmlschema-1/structures.html
(member-only link), does show the correction. 

The text in question is generated in part by the stylesheets, so the 
change was to the stylesheets, not to the XML source.  Examining 
the file history on the server, I speculate that the latest version of 
the wording proposal was created using an out of date copy of the stylesheets,
so that it does not show the correction.  But it has in fact been taken
care of.  Thank you for checking.
Comment 6 John Arwe 2008-03-20 12:39:18 UTC
all fine then