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Bug 5041 - Editorial change proposals for the guidelines document
Summary: Editorial change proposals for the guidelines document
Status: RESOLVED FIXED
Alias: None
Product: WS-Policy
Classification: Unclassified
Component: Guidelines (show other bugs)
Version: FPWD
Hardware: PC Windows XP
: P2 normal
Target Milestone: ---
Assignee: Felix Sasaki
QA Contact: Web Services Policy WG QA List
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Reported: 2007-09-12 15:39 UTC by Felix Sasaki
Modified: 2007-09-12 16:46 UTC (History)
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Description Felix Sasaki 2007-09-12 15:39:38 UTC
Target: Guidelines

Description: Editorial change proposals for the guidelines document.

Sec. 1:
"Each policy alternative a collection of policy assertions." to
"Each policy alternative is a collection of policy assertions."
Sec. 5.1:
"and, a set of valid policy subjects" to
"and a set of valid policy subjects"
""Foo" has the same semantic " to
""Foo" has the same semantics "
Sec. 5.3.1:
"exactly one" to "ExactlyOne"
"all" to "All"
Sec. 5.5.1:
"compatability " to "compatibility"
Sec. 5.6.1 needs update with "outstanding AI" mentioned in editorial note, or deletion of that note.
Sec. 6.1:
"The contents of the parameter are static and allows reuse in different security scenerios" to
"The content of the parameter are static and allows reuse in different security scenarios"
App. C:
Update reference to SWASDL to "W3C Recommendation 28 August 2007"

Felix
Comment 1 Christopher Ferris 2007-09-12 16:46:24 UTC
RESOLUTION: Issue 5041 closed by adopting felix's proposed edits
See http://www.w3.org/2007/09/12-ws-policy-irc#T16-46-07