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Bug 4735 - [FT] editorial: E.3 XQueryX for XQuery 1.0 and XPath 2.0 Full-Text 1.0 example
Summary: [FT] editorial: E.3 XQueryX for XQuery 1.0 and XPath 2.0 Full-Text 1.0 example
Status: CLOSED FIXED
Alias: None
Product: XPath / XQuery / XSLT
Classification: Unclassified
Component: Full Text 1.0 (show other bugs)
Version: Last Call drafts
Hardware: All All
: P2 minor
Target Milestone: ---
Assignee: Jim Melton
QA Contact: Mailing list for public feedback on specs from XSL and XML Query WGs
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Reported: 2007-06-23 10:17 UTC by Michael Dyck
Modified: 2007-08-12 02:34 UTC (History)
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Description Michael Dyck 2007-06-23 10:17:56 UTC
E.3 XQueryX for XQuery 1.0 and XPath 2.0 Full-Text 1.0 example

[1]
para 1
"The following examples ... For each example"
    There's only one example.

[2]
"we show the English description of the query"
    Actually, we don't.

[3]
"an XQueryX solution"
    s/XQueryX/Full-Text XQueryX/ ?

[4]
"and the XQuery Full-Text expression that results"
    s/expression/module/ (or "query")

[5]
"from applying the Full-Ttext XQueryX-to-XQuery Full-Text transformation"
    s/Ttext/Text/

[6]
"to the Full-Text XQueryX solution"
    It's odd: "Full-Text XQueryX" vs. "XQuery Full-Text".

[7]
"That produced XQuery Full-Text expression"
    s/That produced/The latter/

[8]
"The semantics of the Full-Text XQueryX ..."
    From here to the end of the para doesn't belong in an "example"
    section. Move it (or something like it) to E.
Comment 1 Jim Melton 2007-08-12 02:34:21 UTC
We agree with your suggestions and, with the exception of your item [6], have made the changes that you suggested.  We have marked this bug FIXED and CLOSED.