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Bug 4205 - editorial nits
Summary: editorial nits
Status: RESOLVED FIXED
Alias: None
Product: WS-Policy
Classification: Unclassified
Component: Framework (show other bugs)
Version: LC
Hardware: PC Windows XP
: P2 normal
Target Milestone: ---
Assignee: Christopher Ferris
QA Contact: Web Services Policy WG QA List
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Reported: 2007-01-12 17:04 UTC by Christopher Ferris
Modified: 2007-01-17 00:50 UTC (History)
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Description Christopher Ferris 2007-01-12 17:04:21 UTC
These editorial comments are based on the editor's draft:

http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/~checkout~/2006/ws/policy/ws-policy-framework.html?content-type=text/html;%20charset=utf-8
Editors' copy $Date: 2007/01/08 17:20:44 $

Introduction

change:
A policy is a collection of policy alternatives, where a policy alternative  is a collection of policy assertions. 

to:
A policy is a collection of policy alternatives. A policy alternative  is a collection of policy assertions. 

change:
A policy expression is an XML Infoset representation of a policy, either in a normal form or in an equivalent compact form. 

to:
A policy expression is an XML Infoset representation of a policy, either in its normal form or in its equivalent compact form. 

(we only have one normal form. a normal form suggests that there are more than one)

change:
Some policy assertions specify traditional requirements and capabilities that will ultimately manifest on the wire (e.g., authentication scheme, transport protocol selection). 

to:
Some policy assertions specify requirements and capabilities that will manifest themselves in the messages exchanged (e.g., authentication scheme, transport protocol selection). 

change:
Other policy assertions have no wire manifestation yet are critical to proper service selection and usage (e.g., privacy policy, QoS characteristics). 

to:
Other policy assertions have no manifestation in the messages exchanged, yet are relevant to service selection and usage (e.g., privacy policy, QoS characteristics). 

Section 2.1

change:
Information items properties are indicated by the style [infoset property]. 

to:
Information item properties are indicated by the style [infoset property].
Comment 1 Christopher Ferris 2007-01-17 00:50:24 UTC
See http://www.w3.org/2007/01/16-ws-policy-irc#T00-49-54
RESOLUTION 4205 resolved with proposal http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-ws-policy/2007Jan/0088.html