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Bug 10949 - [XQuery11] editorial: 4.10 Decimal-Format Declaration
Summary: [XQuery11] editorial: 4.10 Decimal-Format Declaration
Status: RESOLVED FIXED
Alias: None
Product: XPath / XQuery / XSLT
Classification: Unclassified
Component: XQuery 3.0 (show other bugs)
Version: Member-only Editors Drafts
Hardware: PC Linux
: P2 minor
Target Milestone: ---
Assignee: Jonathan Robie
QA Contact: Mailing list for public feedback on specs from XSL and XML Query WGs
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Reported: 2010-10-01 08:07 UTC by Michael Dyck
Modified: 2011-04-26 21:43 UTC (History)
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Description Michael Dyck 2010-10-01 08:07:50 UTC
4.10 Decimal-Format Declaration

[1]
"A decimal-format declaration defines statically known decimal formats,"
    It would be more consistent to say something like:
    "A decimal-format declaration defines a decimal format,"
    or
    "A decimal-format declaration adds a decimal format to the statically
    known decimal formats,"
  
[2]
"It is a static error for a query prolog to contain two decimal formats
with the same name, or to contain two default decimal formats.
[err:XQST0111]."
    A query prolog doesn't 'contain' decimal formats.
    You can say either that:
        it contains decimal-format declarations,
    or that
        it declares/defines decimal formats.

    Also, the "[err:XQST0111]" shouldn't be a separate sentence.

[3]
"It is a static error for a decimal-format to specify..."
    After "decimal-format", insert "declaration".

[4]
"It is a static error if [...] the properties [...] do not each have
distinct values."
    Delete "each".
Comment 1 Jonathan Robie 2011-04-26 21:43:12 UTC
Resolved in query-prolog.xml, revision 1.73.