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Bug 1037 - Comments of editorial nature
Summary: Comments of editorial nature
Status: CLOSED FIXED
Alias: None
Product: WS Choreography
Classification: Unclassified
Component: Last Call Comment: Confirmed Closed (show other bugs)
Version: unspecified
Hardware: PC Linux
: P2 normal
Target Milestone: --
Assignee: Martin Chapman
QA Contact: Martin Chapman
URL: http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/p...
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Reported: 2005-01-20 20:27 UTC by Greg Ritzinger
Modified: 2005-07-18 18:52 UTC (History)
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Description Greg Ritzinger 2005-01-20 20:27:19 UTC
1. Section 1, 1st para, 1st sentence.   
   Typographical error      
   Replace   
   "organizations have being developing"   
   with   
   "organizations have been developing"   
     
 2. Section 1.5, 1st para, 1st sentence.   
   Replace   
   "A Choreography Description Language"   
   with   
   "The Choreography Description Language"   
     
 3. Section 2.1, 3rd bullet, 3rd sub-bullet, 1st sentence.   
   Point of clarity   
   Should the sentence   
   "A Finalizer Block describes how to specify additional interactions that ..."   
   be changed to   
   "A Finalizer Block specifies additional interactions that ..."?   
     
 4. Section 2.2.2, 2nd para, last sentence.   
   Typographical error      
   Replace   
   "... as well as semantic ;checks, ..."   
   with   
   "... as well as semantic checks, ..."   
     
 5. Section 2.2.2, 2nd para, last sentence.   
   Replace   
   "... such as unicity  ..."   
   with   
   "... such as uniqueness  ..."   
     
 6. Section 2.2.2, example code, <variable> element, role attribute.   
   Typographical error      
   Replace   
   role="randomRome"   
   with   
   role="randomRole"   
     
 7. Section 2.2.2, example code, 2nd <xi:include> element, xpointer attribute.   
   Missing closing "      
   Replace   
   xpointer="xpointer(//choreography/variable[1])    
   with   
   xpointer="xpointer(//choreography/variable[1])"   
     
 8. Section 2.2.5, 1st para, 2nd sentence.   
   Change font to courier      
   "description"   
     
 9. Section 2.2.5, 1st para, 3rd sentence.   
   Point of clarity   
   Replace   
   "... of the description."   
   with   
   "... of the description sub-element."   
     
 10. Section 2.3.4, 3rd last paragraph, 1st sentence.   
   Change font to courier      
   "identity"   
     
 11. Section 2.4.2, 5th last paragraph, 1st sentence.   
   Change font to courier      
   "free"   
     
 12. Section 2.4.3.1, 1st function, 1st sentence.   
   Typographical error      
   Replace   
   ... about it,s own time    
   with   
   ... about it's own time   
     
 13. Section 2.4.3.1, 2nd function, 1st sentence.   
   Typographical error      
   Replace   
   ... about it,s own date    
   with   
   ... about it's own date   
     
 14. Section 2.4.3.1, 3rd function, 1st sentence.   
   Typographical error      
   Replace   
   ... about it,s own date/time    
   with   
   ... about it's own date/time   
     
 15. Section 2.4.3.1, 4th function, 1st sentence.   
   Typographical error      
   Replace   
   Returns "true" if, (a) used in a guard ...    
   with   
   Returns "true" if (a) used in a guard ...   
     
 16. Section 2.4.3.1, 4th function, 1st sentence.   
   Grammar      
   Replace   
   ... either the guard or the repetition condition were enabled  ...    
   with   
   ... either the guard or the repetition condition was enabled  ...   
     
 17. Section 2.4.3.1, 5th function, 1st sentence.   
   Typographical error      
   Replace   
   Returns "true" if, (a) used in a guard ...    
   with   
   Returns "true" if (a) used in a guard ...   
     
 18. Section 2.4.3.1, 5th function, 1st sentence.   
   Grammar      
   Replace   
   ... either the guard or the repetition condition were enabled  ...    
   with   
   ... either the guard or the repetition condition was enabled  ...   
     
 19. Section 2.5.2.3, 10th paragraph, 1st bullet.   
   Missing word "from"    
   Replace   
   When the action attribute is set to "request", then the information exchange
happens fromRole to toRole    
   with   
   When the action attribute is set to "request", then the information exchange
happens from fromRole to toRole   
     
 20. Section 2.5.2.3, 11th paragraph, 7th bullet.   
   Change font to courier      
   "receive"   
     
 21. Section 2.5.2.3, 11th paragraph, 11th bullet, 1st sub-bullet.   
   Change font to courier      
   "send"   
     
 22. Section 2.5.2.3, 11th paragraph, 11th bullet, 2nd sub-bullet.   
   Change font to courier      
   "send"   
     
 23. Section 2.5.2.3, 12th paragraph, 1st sentence.   
   Replace      
   "... or the deadline before an Interaction MUST complete."   
   with   
   "... or the deadline before which an Interaction MUST complete."   
     
 24. Section 2.5.2.3, 13th paragraph, 1st sentence.   
   Replace      
   "The OPTIONAL element record is used ..."   
   with   
   "The OPTIONAL record element is used ..."   
     
 25. Section 2.5.2.3, 13th paragraph, 2nd bullet.   
   Change font to courier      
   "source"   
     
 26. Section 2.5.2.3, 15th paragraph, 6th bullet.   
   Change font to courier      
   "record"   
     
     
 27. Section 2.5.2.3, 15th paragraph, 7th bullet.   
   Change font to courier      
   "record"   
     
 28. Section 2.5.2.3, 15th paragraph, 9th bullet.   
   Change font to courier      
   "record"   
     
 29. Section 2.5.2.3, 15th paragraph, 9th bullet.   
   Change font to courier      
   "record"   
   Note two instances of "record" element in one sentence.   
     
 30. Section 2.5.2.3, 15th paragraph, 10th bullet, 2nd sub-bullet.   
   Change font to courier      
   "record"   
     
 31. Section 2.5.3, 1st paragraph, 2nd bullet.   
   Replace      
   "An "Order Placement" Choreography, where the "Buyer" Role places and order
..."   
   with   
   "An "Order Placement" Choreography, where the "Buyer" Role places an order
..."
Comment 1 Martin Chapman 2005-01-25 21:13:33 UTC
editorial typos
Comment 2 Martin Chapman 2005-02-14 21:12:47 UTC
From meeting on 25-jan-05:
http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Member/member-ws-chor/2005Jan/att-0010/2005-01-
25_WS-Chor_Notes.txt

Editorial - typos. 
Comment 3 Greg Ritzinger 2005-05-25 20:52:02 UTC
Changed all these typographical errors as suggested in the issue
description.
Comment 4 Martin Chapman 2005-07-14 15:28:15 UTC
Yin-Leng has been informed of the group's resolution to this issue [1].
changed to closed, and awaiting confirmation.

[1] http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-ws-chor-
comments/2005Jul/0002.html
Comment 5 Martin Chapman 2005-07-18 18:52:32 UTC
Yin Leng has confirmed the resolution:

http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-ws-chor-comments/2005Jul/0010.html