ISSUE-655: Various comments on Overview from Bob DuCharme
overview-ducharme
Various comments on Overview from Bob DuCharme
- State:
- RAISED
- Product:
- PROV-OVERVIEW
- Raised by:
- Simon Miles
- Opened on:
- 2013-03-26
- Description:
- Bob DuCharme's comments on PROV-Overview
From original mail:
http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-prov-comments/2013Mar/0013.html
typos: defintions, Dublic (Spinal Tap reference: did you mean "Dubly"?),
"these these", "that each document on" (that each document is on?),
Table in section 2: In the Document column, several sentences are
missing periods at the end.
The PROV-DICTIONARY summary should have a few more words about why this
document exists for the benefit of those reading this document as their
very first PROV document, because the notion of collection hasn't been
introduced yet.
PROV-LINKS entry on the table: same comment, but about bundles. (Section
2 further on has a better short explanation of this document's purpose.) - Related Actions Items:
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- Related emails:
- PROV-ISSUE-655 (overview-ducharme): Various comments on Overview from Bob DuCharme [PROV-OVERVIEW] (from sysbot+tracker@w3.org on 2013-03-26)
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