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    <bug>
          <bug_id>8177</bug_id>
          
          <creation_ts>2009-11-04 16:58:45 +0000</creation_ts>
          <short_desc>Transfer: intro is a bit off w.r.t. create</short_desc>
          <delta_ts>2009-12-09 09:40:22 +0000</delta_ts>
          <reporter_accessible>1</reporter_accessible>
          <cclist_accessible>1</cclist_accessible>
          <classification_id>1</classification_id>
          <classification>Unclassified</classification>
          <product>WS-Resource Access</product>
          <component>Transfer</component>
          <version>FPWD</version>
          <rep_platform>PC</rep_platform>
          <op_sys>Windows XP</op_sys>
          <bug_status>CLOSED</bug_status>
          <resolution>REMIND</resolution>
          
          
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          <status_whiteboard></status_whiteboard>
          <keywords></keywords>
          <priority>P2</priority>
          <bug_severity>normal</bug_severity>
          <target_milestone>---</target_milestone>
          
          
          <everconfirmed>1</everconfirmed>
          <reporter name="Doug Davis">dug</reporter>
          <assigned_to name="Doug Davis">dug</assigned_to>
          
          
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    <commentid>29305</commentid>
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    <who name="Doug Davis">dug</who>
    <bug_when>2009-11-04 16:58:45 +0000</bug_when>
    <thetext>Intro says defines two entities, the 2nd one (bullet) says:

Resource factories, which are Web services that can create a new resource from an XML representation

this is a bit wrong since it implies that the XML on the create is just
the XML representation when it could be an instruction.  It could confuse people.

Proposal:
change it to:
Resource factories, which are Web services that can create a new resource

basically, just delete &quot;from an XML representation&quot;.  This aligns it
with the definition of Resource Factory in section 2.1 too.</thetext>
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