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    <bug>
          <bug_id>7365</bug_id>
          
          <creation_ts>2009-08-18 21:55:21 +0000</creation_ts>
          <short_desc>All: skipped rfc2119 terms</short_desc>
          <delta_ts>2015-06-20 16:35:01 +0000</delta_ts>
          <reporter_accessible>1</reporter_accessible>
          <cclist_accessible>1</cclist_accessible>
          <classification_id>1</classification_id>
          <classification>Unclassified</classification>
          <product>WS-Resource Access</product>
          <component>All</component>
          <version>FPWD</version>
          <rep_platform>All</rep_platform>
          <op_sys>All</op_sys>
          <bug_status>CLOSED</bug_status>
          <resolution>REMIND</resolution>
          
          
          <bug_file_loc></bug_file_loc>
          <status_whiteboard></status_whiteboard>
          <keywords></keywords>
          <priority>P2</priority>
          <bug_severity>normal</bug_severity>
          <target_milestone>---</target_milestone>
          
          
          <everconfirmed>1</everconfirmed>
          <reporter name="Doug Davis">dug</reporter>
          <assigned_to name="notifications mailing list for WS Resource Access">public-ws-resource-access-notifications</assigned_to>
          
          
          <qa_contact name="notifications mailing list for WS Resource Access">public-ws-resource-access-notifications</qa_contact>

      

      

      

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          <long_desc isprivate="0" >
    <commentid>26523</commentid>
    <comment_count>0</comment_count>
    <who name="Doug Davis">dug</who>
    <bug_when>2009-08-18 21:55:21 +0000</bug_when>
    <thetext>These were missed in the previous reviews and are nits but
rather than overstepping my boundaries as editor I decided to 
give us an easy issue to resolve next week  :-)

Most specs say:
This is a draft document and may be updated, replaced
or obsoleted by other documents at any time.

Proposal:
s/may/can/

And in Transfer&apos;s security section it says:
When the Action URIs defined by this specification are used, such extension specifications must also allow the basic processing models defined herein.

Proposal:
s/must/MUST/</thetext>
  </long_desc><long_desc isprivate="0" >
    <commentid>26669</commentid>
    <comment_count>1</comment_count>
    <who name="Robert Freund">bob</who>
    <bug_when>2009-08-26 01:42:00 +0000</bug_when>
    <thetext>resolved as proposed</thetext>
  </long_desc><long_desc isprivate="0" >
    <commentid>121271</commentid>
    <comment_count>2</comment_count>
    <who name="Jackie">jackiewindsor09</who>
    <bug_when>2015-06-20 16:34:12 +0000</bug_when>
    <thetext>Please make my changes</thetext>
  </long_desc><long_desc isprivate="0" >
    <commentid>121351</commentid>
    <comment_count>3</comment_count>
    <who name="Jackie">jackiewindsor09</who>
    <bug_when>2015-06-20 16:35:01 +0000</bug_when>
    <thetext>Please make my changes</thetext>
  </long_desc>
      
      

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