6725 2009-03-23 18:20:23 +0000 Eventing: Editorial comments on Eventing 2009-03-17 WD 2009-08-05 12:44:07 +0000 1 1 1 Unclassified WS-Resource Access Eventing FPWD PC All CLOSED REMIND http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-ws-resource-access-comments/2009Mar/0001.html externalComments, reviewerSatisfied P2 minor --- 1 bob dug asirveda dug public-ws-resource-access-notifications oldest_to_newest 24378 0 bob 2009-03-23 18:20:23 +0000 I have two minor comments on the March 17th draft: - Terminology (3.3): I wonder about the difference between "event message" and "notification". The former should be defined, or uniformly replaced by the latter imho. - Terminology (3.3): leftover "manage" in the definition of "Subscription Manager" Best, Eric Dujardin -- Eric Dujardin THALES-TRT RD 128 F-91767 Palaiseau (33-1) 69 41 55 45 Received on Monday, 23 March 2009 14:57:33 GMT 24379 1 dug 2009-03-23 18:29:04 +0000 Proposal: Change all uses of "event messages" with "notifications". The first use will actually just be deleted since "notifications" is already in that sentence. Change: Subscription Manager A Web service that accepts requests to manage get the status of, renew, and/or delete subscriptions on behalf of an event source. To: Subscription Manager A Web service that accepts requests to manage, get the status of, renew, and/or delete subscriptions on behalf of an event source. Added a comma after "manage". I think its the right word. 24610 2 asirveda 2009-04-07 20:08:03 +0000 Proposal from Ram Suggested change: • Section 3.3 [1]: In the definition of “Delivery Mode”, change “The mechanism by which event messages are delivered from the source to the sink” to “The mechanism by which event messages (or notifications) are delivered from the source to the sink.”. • Section 3.3 [1]: In the definition of “Subscription Manager”: Change “A Web service that accepts requests to manage get the status of, renew, and/or delete subscriptions on behalf of an event source.” To “A Web service that accepts requests to create, get the status of, renew, and/or delete subscriptions on behalf of an event source.”. [1] http://www.w3.org/TR/2009/WD-ws-eventing-20090317/#terms 24611 3 bob 2009-04-07 20:14:17 +0000 Proposal: Change all uses of "event messages" with "notifications". The first use will actually just be deleted since "notifications" is already in that sentence. Suggested change: • Section 3.3 [1]: In the definition of “Delivery Mode”, change “The mechanism by which event messages are delivered from the source to the sink” to “The mechanism by which event notifications are delivered from the source to the sink.”. • Section 3.3 [1]: In the definition of “Subscription Manager”: Change “A Web service that accepts requests to manage get the status of, renew, and/or delete subscriptions on behalf of an event source.” To “A Web service that accepts requests to create, get the status of, renew, and/or delete subscriptions on behalf of an event source.”. [1] http://www.w3.org/TR/2009/WD-ws-eventing-20090317/#terms 24618 4 dug 2009-04-07 23:42:27 +0000 typo in the resolution - it's not "event notifications", its just "notifications" 26230 5 bob 2009-08-05 12:44:07 +0000 reviewer Satisfied http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-ws-resource-access-comments/2009Apr/0001.html