5113 2007-10-01 14:25:21 +0000 smlif minor editorial comments 2007-11-22 17:44:54 +0000 1 1 1 Unclassified SML Interchange Format unspecified PC Windows XP RESOLVED FIXED resolved P2 normal LC 5101 1 johnarwe popescu public-sml oldest_to_newest 16930 0 johnarwe 2007-10-01 14:25:21 +0000 SMLIF 2 Informal Desc from "...permits many different addressing mechanisms." to "...permits many different reference schemes ." SMLIF 2 Informal Desc from "...to establish which element the reference points to." to "...to establish which the reference target ." (term defined via bug 5101) 3.1 Conformance Criteria, 3.2 Terminology Render consistently w/ SML. Suggest adopting SML's structure and placement for each, adding "Notations & Terminology" heading ala SML. 3.1 Conformance Criteria Re-cast statements using RFC2119 keywords. 3.3 SML-IF Documents [Definition: ...] move all of these in a named section like SML render all of them consistently across both specs (either all [Definition: ...] or none that way) 3.3 SML-IF Documents fix all [Ed. note: insert link to definition] 3.3 SML-IF Documents from "interchange set MUST appear as a child of a document element that is a child of the definitions element of the SML-IF document" to "interchange set MUST appear as a child of a model/definitions/document element" 3.3 SML-IF Documents from "interchange set MUST appear as a child of a document element that is a child of the instances element of the SML-IF document" to "interchange set MUST appear as a child of a model/instances/document element" 3.3.1 Embedded Documents from "If a document is to be embedded..." to "If a model document is to be embedded..." 3.3.1 Embedded Documents - Note add "non-normative" 3.3.1 Embedded Documents from "...the content of the data child of the corresponding document element." to "...the content of */document/data." 3.4.2 Definition of inter-document references in SML-IF change to monospace font - "xs:" (2x) - "list of" between type and xs:anyURI 3.4.2 Definition of inter-document references in SML-IF from "...is defined by protocol binding used to interact with the endpoint" to "...is defined by the protocol binding used to interact with the endpoint" 3.4.3 SML reference schemes that are not SML-IF inter-document references from "3.4.3 SML reference schemes that are not SML-IF inter-document references" to "3.4.3 Not all SML reference schemes are SML-IF inter-document references" 3.4.3 SML reference schemes that are not SML-IF inter-document references italicize both words in "reference schemes", first line 3.4.4 Document aliases from "...there can be no inter-document references to it." to "...there can be no inter-document references or rule bindings to it." 3.5.1 URI prefix matching fix [Ed. note: add link to definition] 3.5.1 URI prefix matching from "...combination of alias mechanism described above..." to "...combination of the alias mechanism described above..." 3.5.1 URI prefix matching "combination of alias mechanism described above and URI prefix matching." insert reference to 3.4.4, now several sections away 3.5.2 Bindings defined from "...various uses of SML-IF may well choose..." to "...various uses of SML-IF MAY choose..." 4.1 Normative References from "Service Modeling Language, Version 1.1, John John, Editors...." to "Service Modeling Language, Version 1.1, -correct editors-, Editors...." B. Open Issues (Non-Normative) remove entire section we opened bugs for all of these in June 17449 1 virginia.smith 2007-10-26 15:44:17 +0000 All changes made except for changes to secion marked section 3.4.3 - since this overlaps with bug 4865. (this section is 4.3.3 in latest version) Also changed inter-document to interdocument based on research into technical style guides. 17833 2 sandygao 2007-11-22 16:16:58 +0000 Reopening this bug. The following comment: 3.3.1 Embedded Documents - Note add "non-normative" Should only be applied to the "Note"; but the entire section (now 5.2.1) was marked non-normative. 17836 3 popescu 2007-11-22 17:44:54 +0000 Fixed per comment #2; moved non-normative comment under the Note http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/~checkout~/2007/xml/sml/build/sml-if.html?content-type=text/html;%20charset=utf-8#embedded_documents