5041 2007-09-12 15:39:38 +0000 Editorial change proposals for the guidelines document 2007-09-12 16:46:24 +0000 1 1 1 Unclassified WS-Policy Guidelines FPWD PC Windows XP RESOLVED FIXED P2 normal --- 1 fsasaki fsasaki public-ws-policy-qa oldest_to_newest 16510 0 fsasaki 2007-09-12 15:39:38 +0000 Target: Guidelines Description: Editorial change proposals for the guidelines document. Sec. 1: "Each policy alternative a collection of policy assertions." to "Each policy alternative is a collection of policy assertions." Sec. 5.1: "and, a set of valid policy subjects" to "and a set of valid policy subjects" ""Foo" has the same semantic " to ""Foo" has the same semantics " Sec. 5.3.1: "exactly one" to "ExactlyOne" "all" to "All" Sec. 5.5.1: "compatability " to "compatibility" Sec. 5.6.1 needs update with "outstanding AI" mentioned in editorial note, or deletion of that note. Sec. 6.1: "The contents of the parameter are static and allows reuse in different security scenerios" to "The content of the parameter are static and allows reuse in different security scenarios" App. C: Update reference to SWASDL to "W3C Recommendation 28 August 2007" Felix 16514 1 chrisfer 2007-09-12 16:46:24 +0000 RESOLUTION: Issue 5041 closed by adopting felix's proposed edits See http://www.w3.org/2007/09/12-ws-policy-irc#T16-46-07