5036 2007-09-12 08:38:46 +0000 Editorial change proposals for the primer 2007-09-12 16:44:54 +0000 1 1 1 Unclassified WS-Policy Primer FPWD PC Windows XP RESOLVED FIXED P2 normal --- 1 fsasaki fsasaki public-ws-policy-qa oldest_to_newest 16479 0 fsasaki 2007-09-12 08:38:46 +0000 Target: Primer Description: Editorial change proposals for the primer. Sec. 2.1: "Policy is a simple language that has four elements - Policy, All, ExactlyOne and PolicyReference - and one attribute - wsp:Optional." to "Policy is a simple language that has four elements - Policy, All, ExactlyOne and PolicyReference - and two attributes - wsp:Optional and wsp:Ignorable." Sec. 2.2: "Child elements of the Policy element are policy assertions." to "Child elements of the Policy element that are not from the Policy namespace are policy assertions." Sec. 2.8: "both "optional" and "Ignorable" to both "Optional" and "Ignorable" (upper case for "Optional") "@wsp:optional=true" to "@wsp:Optional=true" Sec. 2.10: "the wsu:Id xml:id and Name attributes." to "the wsu:Id, xml:id and Name attributes." "complicated policy scenerios" to "complicated policy scenarios" "parametrized" to "parameterized" Sec. 2.12: "As you have seen, Web Services Policy is a simple language that has four elements - Policy, All, ExactlyOne and PolicyReference - and one attribute - wsp:Optional. " to "As you have seen, Web Services Policy is a simple language that has four elements - Policy, All, ExactlyOne and PolicyReference - and two attributes - wsp:Optional and wsp:Ignorable. " Sec. 3.2: "These alternatives map to bullets (a) through (d) above." to "These alternatives map to list items (1) through (4) above." Sec. 3.3.: "view policy as an unordered collection" to "view a policy as an unordered collection" Sec. 3.4.1: "how the normal-form of a policy expression relate" to "how the normal-form of a policy expression relates" Sec. 4.1: "The default value for wsp:Optional="false"." to "The default value for wsp:Optional is "false"." App. C: The reference to ws-addr-metadata needs to be updated. Felix 16513 1 chrisfer 2007-09-12 16:44:54 +0000 [12:43] cferris: RESOLUTION: Issue 5036 closed by adopting felix's proposed edits See http://www.w3.org/2007/09/12-ws-policy-irc#T16-44-13