4914 2007-08-04 00:13:02 +0000 editorial changes suggested by webmaster 2007-08-04 08:17:53 +0000 1 1 1 Unclassified SML Core+Interchange Format FPWD PC All RESOLVED FIXED P2 normal FPWD 1 kumarp kumarp public-sml oldest_to_newest 16054 0 kumarp 2007-08-04 00:13:02 +0000 webmaster needs the following changes before FPWD can be made public on the web. 1# The date of this document should be set on 06 August 2007 (date of the publication, not 31 July) as the URI for "This version:", should be http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/WD-sml-20070806/ not http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/WD-sml-20070731 (In general we prefer the use of a trailing slash at the end of links when they're used to reach some folder e.g http://www.w3.org/TR/sml-if/ instead of http://www.w3.org/TR/sml-if) 2# It MUST include the name of the W3C group that produced the document. The name MUST be a link to a public page for the group. 3# mailingList Name : It MUST include the name of a mailing list for comments that has a public archive. 4# mailingList Link : It MUST include a link to the public archive of that mailing list. For those points (2#, 3#, 4#) it's just the links that haven't been set yet on the Status of the Document. 5# The boilerplate text is incorrect, on both documents, I suggest that you copy/paste this one; <p class="copyright"><a href="http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Legal/ipr-notice#Copyright">Copyright</a> &copy; 2007 <a href="http://www.w3.org/"><acronym title="World Wide Web Consortium">W3C</acronym></a>^&reg; (<a href="http://www.csail.mit.edu/"><acronym title="Massachusetts Institute of Technology">MIT</acronym></a>, <a href="http://www.ercim.org/"><acronym title="European Research Consortium for Informatics and Mathematics">ERCIM</acronym></a>, <a href="http://www.keio.ac.jp/">Keio</a>), All Rights Reserved. W3C <a href="http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Legal/ipr-notice#Legal_Disclaimer">liability</a>, <a href="http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Legal/ipr-notice#W3C_Trademarks">trademark</a> and <a href="http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Legal/copyright-documents">document use</a> rules apply.</p> The errors came from the fact you directly used the signs © and ® instead of &copy; and &reg; . 6# There is some an error with you CSS style; on the sml & sml-if documents; background-color coral is not a color. 7# Following Namespaces are invalid/unreachable - On the sml document (~/TR/2007/WD-sml-20070806/) http://www.w3.org/2007/07/sml (3 occurrences) http://www.w3.org/2007/07/sml-err (3 occurrences) http://www.w3.org/2007/07/sml-function (3 occurrences) http://www.w3.org/@@@@/@@/sml (4 occurrences) http://www.w3.org/@@@@/@@/sml-err (2 occurrences) http://www.w3.org/@@@@/@@/sml-function (3 occurrences) Should be ~/2007/08/ instead of ~/@@@@/@@/ or ~/2007/07/ http://msdn.microsoft.com/library/default.asp?url=/library/en-us/dnxml/html/schematron.asp (1 occurrence) http://standards.iso.org/ittf/PubliclyAvailableStandards/c040833_ISO_IEC_19757-3_2006(E (1 occurrence) http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/WD-sml-20070731 (1 occurrence) should be replaced by ~/TR/2007/WD-sml-20070806/ - On the sml-if document (~/TR/2007/WD-sml-if-20070806/) http://www.w3.org/2007/07/sml (1 occurrence) http://www.w3.org/2007/07/smlif (2 occurrences) http://www.w3.org/@@@@/@@/smlif (2 occurrences) Should be ~/2007/08/ instead of ~/@@@@/@@/ or ~/2007/07/ http://standards.iso.org/ittf/PubliclyAvailableStandards/c040833_ISO_IEC_19757-3_2006(E (1 occurrence) http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/WD-sml-20070731 (1 occurrence) http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/WD-sml-if-20070731 (1 occurrence) please replace 20070731 by 20070806/ Also, I was unable to find the .xml versions of your documents under http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/~checkout~/2007/xml/sml/build/ I'll need sml.xml & sml-if.xml. Thanks for you attention, Best regards. -- Jules CLEMENT-RIPOCHE <jules@w3.org> World Wide Web Consortium W3C / System Team - Webmaster http://www.w3.org/