4205 2007-01-12 17:04:21 +0000 editorial nits 2007-01-17 00:50:24 +0000 1 1 1 Unclassified WS-Policy Framework LC PC Windows XP RESOLVED FIXED P2 normal --- 1 chrisfer chrisfer public-ws-policy-qa oldest_to_newest 13485 0 chrisfer 2007-01-12 17:04:21 +0000 These editorial comments are based on the editor's draft: http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/~checkout~/2006/ws/policy/ws-policy-framework.html?content-type=text/html;%20charset=utf-8 Editors' copy $Date: 2019/04/02 03:27:58 $ Introduction change: A policy is a collection of policy alternatives, where a policy alternative is a collection of policy assertions. to: A policy is a collection of policy alternatives. A policy alternative is a collection of policy assertions. change: A policy expression is an XML Infoset representation of a policy, either in a normal form or in an equivalent compact form. to: A policy expression is an XML Infoset representation of a policy, either in its normal form or in its equivalent compact form. (we only have one normal form. a normal form suggests that there are more than one) change: Some policy assertions specify traditional requirements and capabilities that will ultimately manifest on the wire (e.g., authentication scheme, transport protocol selection). to: Some policy assertions specify requirements and capabilities that will manifest themselves in the messages exchanged (e.g., authentication scheme, transport protocol selection). change: Other policy assertions have no wire manifestation yet are critical to proper service selection and usage (e.g., privacy policy, QoS characteristics). to: Other policy assertions have no manifestation in the messages exchanged, yet are relevant to service selection and usage (e.g., privacy policy, QoS characteristics). Section 2.1 change: Information items properties are indicated by the style [infoset property]. to: Information item properties are indicated by the style [infoset property]. 13631 1 chrisfer 2007-01-17 00:50:24 +0000 See http://www.w3.org/2007/01/16-ws-policy-irc#T00-49-54 RESOLUTION 4205 resolved with proposal http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-ws-policy/2007Jan/0088.html