4150 2007-01-05 21:00:58 +0000 Duplicate text exists in Section 3 and 3.2, PolicyAttachments 2007-01-16 21:51:24 +0000 1 1 1 Unclassified WS-Policy Attachment LC PC Windows XP RESOLVED FIXED P2 normal --- 1 monica.martin monica.martin fabian.ritzmann public-ws-policy-qa oldest_to_newest 13356 0 monica.martin 2007-01-05 21:00:58 +0000 Title Duplicate text exists in Section 3 and 3.2, PolicyAttachments. [1] Description and Justification In the PolicyAttachments document, duplicate text exists in Sections 3 and 3.2. Section 3 is an introduction whereby Section 3.2 and others provide the details. Duplicate text is: This section defines two general-purpose mechanisms for associating policies with one or more policy subjects. The first allows XML-based descriptions of resources to associate policy <http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/%7Echeckout%7E/2006/ws/policy/ws-policy-attachment.html?content-type=text/html;%20charset=utf-8#policy> as part of their intrinsic definition. The second allows policies to be associated with arbitrary policy subjects independently from their definition. Most of this text fits in Section 3.2. If revised, Section 3 could serve as the introduction. Target Web Services Policy 1.5 - Attachment [2] Proposal Revise Section 3 to minimize duplicative text (given the sections are so close together as well). Revised text for Section 3 is provided below. No change is needed to Section 3.2. Change from: This section defines two general-purpose mechanisms for associating policies with one or more policy subjects. The first allows XML-based descriptions of resources to associate policy <http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/%7Echeckout%7E/2006/ws/policy/ws-policy-attachment.html?content-type=text/html;%20charset=utf-8#policy> as part of their intrinsic definition. The second allows policies to be associated with arbitrary policy subjects independently from their definition. In addition it defines the processing rules for scenarios where multiple policies are attached to a policy subject. Change to: This section defines two general-purpose mechanisms for associating policies with one or more policy subjects. In addition it also specifies the processing rules for scenarios where multiple policies are attached to a policy subject. [1] Section 3: http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/~checkout~/2006/ws/policy/ws-policy-attachment.html?content-type=text/html;%20charset=utf-8#rPolicyAttachment Section 3.2: http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/~checkout~/2006/ws/policy/ws-policy-attachment.html?content-type=text/html;%20charset=utf-8#PolicyAttachmentMechanisms [2] http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/~checkout~/2006/ws/policy/ws-policy-attachment.html?content-type=text/html;%20charset=utf-8 This issue is editorial in nature. 13620 1 chrisfer 2007-01-16 21:51:24 +0000 See http://www.w3.org/2007/01/16-ws-policy-irc#T21-50-18 RESOLUTION: 4150 closed with email http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-ws-policy/2007Jan/0027.html