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          <bug_id>3607</bug_id>
          
          <creation_ts>2006-08-18 03:14:33 +0000</creation_ts>
          <short_desc>Better describe policy language capabilities in the Introduction</short_desc>
          <delta_ts>2006-09-06 17:24:23 +0000</delta_ts>
          <reporter_accessible>1</reporter_accessible>
          <cclist_accessible>1</cclist_accessible>
          <classification_id>1</classification_id>
          <classification>Unclassified</classification>
          <product>WS-Policy</product>
          <component>Framework</component>
          <version>FPWD</version>
          <rep_platform>All</rep_platform>
          <op_sys>All</op_sys>
          <bug_status>RESOLVED</bug_status>
          <resolution>FIXED</resolution>
          
          
          <bug_file_loc>http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-ws-policy/2006Aug/0115.html</bug_file_loc>
          <status_whiteboard></status_whiteboard>
          <keywords></keywords>
          <priority>P2</priority>
          <bug_severity>normal</bug_severity>
          <target_milestone>---</target_milestone>
          
          
          <everconfirmed>1</everconfirmed>
          <reporter name="Yakov Sverdlov">yakov.sverdlov</reporter>
          <assigned_to name="Yakov Sverdlov">yakov.sverdlov</assigned_to>
          
          
          <qa_contact name="Web Services Policy WG QA List">public-ws-policy-qa</qa_contact>

      

      

      

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    <commentid>11208</commentid>
    <comment_count>0</comment_count>
    <who name="Yakov Sverdlov">yakov.sverdlov</who>
    <bug_when>2006-08-18 03:14:33 +0000</bug_when>
    <thetext>Title:
Better describe policy language capabilities in the Introduction

Description: 
I think one of the main goals of the WS-Policy Framework is to provide policy evaluation capabilities i.e. to use the Framework constructs to evaluate combinations of domain-specific policy assertions, nested policies, etc.

The phrase  assertions to be reasoned in the Introduction can be improved to reflect this goal  see proposal. 

Justification:
Wordsmithing

Target: 
WS-Policy Framework 1.Introduction 

Proposal:

In 1.1 Introduction change from: 
Web Services Policy 1.5 - Framework provides a single policy language to allow both kinds of assertions to be reasoned about in a consistent manner.

To:
Web Services Policy 1.5 - Framework provides a single policy language to allow both kinds of assertions to be expressed and evaluated in a consistent manner.</thetext>
  </long_desc><long_desc isprivate="0" >
    <commentid>11425</commentid>
    <comment_count>1</comment_count>
    <who name="Yakov Sverdlov">yakov.sverdlov</who>
    <bug_when>2006-09-06 17:24:23 +0000</bug_when>
    <thetext>The WG agreed to change the text as proposed.</thetext>
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