3563 2006-08-01 17:44:21 +0000 Modify wording about a Web Service in the Introduction 2006-08-31 14:36:25 +0000 1 1 1 Unclassified WS-Policy Framework FPWD All All RESOLVED FIXED http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-ws-policy/2006Jul/0048.html P2 normal --- 1 yakov.sverdlov yakov.sverdlov public-ws-policy-qa oldest_to_newest 10959 0 yakov.sverdlov 2006-08-01 17:44:21 +0000 In the Introduction section, the wording of the Web Service definition "XML Web services-based system" contains a redundant word "XML". Justification: See the Description. Target: WS-Policy Framework, section 1. Introduction. Proposal: Change the wording from "in a XML Web services-based system" to "in a Web services-based system". The alternative solution would be to provide detailed definition of a Web Service (and some relevant definitions: requester, provider,...) in the section 2.4 Terminology. I think this solution will expand the scope of the document, and as such it is not well justified. 11083 1 yakov.sverdlov 2006-08-10 12:14:52 +0000 ACTION: Editors to implement the resolution for issue 3563 [recorded in http://www.w3.org/2006/08/09-ws-policy-minutes.html#action08] Change the wording from "in a XML Web services-based system" to "in a Web services-based system".