3287 2006-05-16 06:56:34 +0000 Clarity of language in the abstract 2006-07-25 07:21:02 +0000 1 1 1 Unclassified ITS ITS tagset LastCall All All RESOLVED FIXED http://www.w3.org/TR/2006/WD-its-20060414/#abstract editorial P2 normal --- 1 karl fsasaki fsasaki oldest_to_newest 9801 0 karl 2006-05-16 06:56:34 +0000 [[[ Abstract This document defines data categories and their implementation as a set of elements and attributes called the Internationalization Tag Set (ITS). ITS is designed to be used with schemas to support the internationalization and localization of schemas and documents. An implementation is provided for three schema languages: XML DTD, XML Schema and RELAX NG. The document provides examples of how ITS can be used with existing vocabularies. Feedback is especially appreciated on the general design of ITS, and on the design of the individual data categories.]]] I suggest to rewrite a bit this introduction. “Internationlization Tag Set (ITS) defines data categories and their implementation as a set of elements and attributes. ITS is designed to be used with schemas to support the internationalization and localization of schemas and documents. Three implementations (XML DTD, XML Schema and RELAX NG) are provided and examples show how ITS can be used with existing vocabularies.” Remove the part about the feedback, the status section is here for that. 9802 1 fsasaki 2006-05-16 09:29:02 +0000 (In reply to comment #0) > [[[ > Abstract > > This document defines data categories and their implementation as a set of > elements and attributes called the Internationalization Tag Set (ITS). ITS is > designed to be used with schemas to support the internationalization and > localization of schemas and documents. An implementation is provided for three > schema languages: XML DTD, XML Schema and RELAX NG. The document provides > examples of how ITS can be used with existing vocabularies. Feedback is > especially appreciated on the general design of ITS, and on the design of the > individual data categories.]]] > > > I suggest to rewrite a bit this introduction. > > “Internationlization Tag Set (ITS) defines data categories and their > implementation as a set of elements and attributes. ITS is designed to be used > with schemas to support the internationalization and localization of schemas > and documents. Three implementations (XML DTD, XML Schema and RELAX NG) are > provided and examples show how ITS can be used with existing vocabularies.” > > Remove the part about the feedback, the status section is here for that. > Many thanks for the comment, Karl! In the last call draft (to be published soon), see http://www.w3.org/International/its/itstagset/itstagset-diff-20060414.html , we already changed the section. Are you o.k. with that? 10473 2 fsasaki 2006-07-13 12:52:04 +0000 This is a response of the ITS working group. The ITS working group has rewritten the introduction in the last call working draft. Does this new version reply to your concerns? If we don't here from you within 2 weeks, we will regard the issue as closed. Regards, Felix Sasaki. 10654 3 karl 2006-07-24 01:26:37 +0000 I guess this is the last version? http://www.w3.org/International/its/itstagset/itstagset.html#introduction Yes my concerns are addressed except one. Do not start both in abstract and introduction with "this document". It's a common mistake from W3C editors, we already know that it's about this document ;) look at my example when I had started to rewrite the intro. :) for the rest thanks. 10685 4 fsasaki 2006-07-24 10:40:34 +0000 (In reply to comment #3) > I guess this is the last version? > http://www.w3.org/International/its/itstagset/itstagset.html#introduction > > Yes my concerns are addressed except one. Do not start both in abstract and > introduction with "this document". It's a common mistake from W3C editors, we > already know that it's about this document ;) look at my example when I had > started to rewrite the intro. :) > > for the rest thanks. > Many thanks, Karl. We will delete "this document" :) Felix Edstatus: pending 10780 5 fsasaki 2006-07-25 07:21:02 +0000 Action: editors to make the change.