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    <bug>
          <bug_id>29886</bug_id>
          
          <creation_ts>2016-09-29 15:31:26 +0000</creation_ts>
          <short_desc>[SER31] 6 XHTML Output Method</short_desc>
          <delta_ts>2016-10-14 13:29:41 +0000</delta_ts>
          <reporter_accessible>1</reporter_accessible>
          <cclist_accessible>1</cclist_accessible>
          <classification_id>1</classification_id>
          <classification>Unclassified</classification>
          <product>XPath / XQuery / XSLT</product>
          <component>Serialization 3.1</component>
          <version>Candidate Recommendation</version>
          <rep_platform>PC</rep_platform>
          <op_sys>Windows NT</op_sys>
          <bug_status>RESOLVED</bug_status>
          <resolution>FIXED</resolution>
          
          
          <bug_file_loc></bug_file_loc>
          <status_whiteboard></status_whiteboard>
          <keywords></keywords>
          <priority>P2</priority>
          <bug_severity>editorial</bug_severity>
          <target_milestone>---</target_milestone>
          
          
          <everconfirmed>1</everconfirmed>
          <reporter name="Tim Mills">tim</reporter>
          <assigned_to name="C. M. Sperberg-McQueen">cmsmcq</assigned_to>
          <cc>andrew_coleman</cc>
          
          <qa_contact name="Mailing list for public feedback on specs from XSL and XML Query WGs">public-qt-comments</qa_contact>

      

      

      

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          <long_desc isprivate="0" >
    <commentid>127607</commentid>
    <comment_count>0</comment_count>
    <who name="Tim Mills">tim</who>
    <bug_when>2016-09-29 15:31:26 +0000</bug_when>
    <thetext>The following sentence reads badly, probably in an effort to avoid ending a sentence of a preposition.

&quot;The [POLYGLOT] specification permits namespace declarations to appear in a conforming document, but there are restrictions on which elements they can appear.&quot;

To avoid saying

&quot;but there are restrictions on on which elements they can appear.&quot;

perhaps

&quot;The [POLYGLOT] specification permits namespace declarations to appear in a conforming document, but restricts the elements on which they can appear.&quot;

would be better?</thetext>
  </long_desc><long_desc isprivate="0" >
    <commentid>127793</commentid>
    <comment_count>1</comment_count>
    <who name="Andrew Coleman">andrew_coleman</who>
    <bug_when>2016-10-14 13:29:41 +0000</bug_when>
    <thetext>Agreed.  Fixed</thetext>
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    </bug>

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