29844 2016-09-21 10:31:40 +0000 [SER31] Start of sentence 2016-10-14 13:18:59 +0000 1 1 1 Unclassified XPath / XQuery / XSLT Serialization 3.1 Candidate Recommendation PC Windows NT RESOLVED FIXED P2 editorial --- 1 tim cmsmcq andrew_coleman mike public-qt-comments oldest_to_newest 127474 0 tim 2016-09-21 10:31:40 +0000 In the test Apply the following two processes in sequence to create CDATA sections i. Unicode Normalization if requested by the normalization-form parameter. ii. apply changes as detailed in the description of the cdata-section-elements parameter for the applicable output method. since (i) ends with a full stop, shouldn't (ii) begin with a capital letter? 127478 1 mike 2016-09-21 10:58:38 +0000 More particularly, items in a list should be grammatically homogenous. If the first is a noun phrase, the second should be a noun phrase. 127782 2 andrew_coleman 2016-10-14 13:18:59 +0000 Reworded second bullet as ii. Application of changes as detailed...