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    <bug>
          <bug_id>29669</bug_id>
          
          <creation_ts>2016-05-26 21:14:35 +0000</creation_ts>
          <short_desc>[xslt30] Editorial work on section 2.4</short_desc>
          <delta_ts>2016-10-06 18:42:19 +0000</delta_ts>
          <reporter_accessible>1</reporter_accessible>
          <cclist_accessible>1</cclist_accessible>
          <classification_id>1</classification_id>
          <classification>Unclassified</classification>
          <product>XPath / XQuery / XSLT</product>
          <component>XSLT 3.0</component>
          <version>Candidate Recommendation</version>
          <rep_platform>PC</rep_platform>
          <op_sys>All</op_sys>
          <bug_status>CLOSED</bug_status>
          <resolution>FIXED</resolution>
          
          
          <bug_file_loc></bug_file_loc>
          <status_whiteboard></status_whiteboard>
          <keywords></keywords>
          <priority>P2</priority>
          <bug_severity>normal</bug_severity>
          <target_milestone>---</target_milestone>
          
          
          <everconfirmed>1</everconfirmed>
          <reporter name="Michael Kay">mike</reporter>
          <assigned_to name="Michael Kay">mike</assigned_to>
          
          
          <qa_contact name="Mailing list for public feedback on specs from XSL and XML Query WGs">public-qt-comments</qa_contact>

      

      

      

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          <long_desc isprivate="0" >
    <commentid>126592</commentid>
    <comment_count>0</comment_count>
    <who name="Michael Kay">mike</who>
    <bug_when>2016-05-26 21:14:35 +0000</bug_when>
    <thetext>See https://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-xsl-wg/2016Mar/0002.html

This proposes a rewrite of the (essentially tutorial) content of section 2.4 to give a more logical flow and to eliminate duplication.</thetext>
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    <commentid>126593</commentid>
    <comment_count>1</comment_count>
    <who name="Michael Kay">mike</who>
    <bug_when>2016-05-26 21:18:02 +0000</bug_when>
    <thetext>A rewrite of this section has been produced on the lines proposed, and awaits review and approval by the WG.</thetext>
  </long_desc><long_desc isprivate="0" >
    <commentid>126652</commentid>
    <comment_count>2</comment_count>
    <who name="Michael Kay">mike</who>
    <bug_when>2016-06-02 19:27:18 +0000</bug_when>
    <thetext>The revised text was approved by the WG today.</thetext>
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